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November- 1- 2024
Gift of Recovery Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Kai Michael Neumann

 

A black cloud envelops my sky Threatening to rain down a torrent of pain Oceans of commotion swirl in my brain And I try to bandage the wounds in vain I see only the receding vistas of light And night prowling like a stealthy thief The past chills the mind like hanging icicles And I feel so heavy with frozen grief I inch my way up like an ugly snail My life is riddled with contradictions Oh, I am waylaid, lost and beaten From every corner, I meet only oppositions Yet dreams break forth in my heart Amidst darkness shines a light A call to spirit to seek the gift of recovery Transforming pain into strength and delight I must break loose of all the tethers Let my soul embrace all that is dear From this cage, I must fly out The sky beyond me lies blue and clear! Even at moments when we feel, God has forsaken us, time assures; However bad things are, recovery is possible, When God is there quelling all our fears. Now I am on a journey of redemption I tell myself- “Come out from this hell Just start anew, nothing is beyond recovery The dawn is near and all shall be well”

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Date: 11/15/2024 2:04:00 PM
A glorious telling. We may all be blessed by this poem, Valsa. Congrats, too. Hugs, God bless you ever more!………sally
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Date: 11/13/2024 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your poem speaks to me loud and clear as if I was present. Sending you loving wishes, Kai
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Date: 11/13/2024 8:36:00 PM
I feel fortunate to have been placed at the top. Thanks a lot dear Kai for this honor and the lovely words of appreciation. Stay Blessed!
Date: 11/13/2024 2:06:00 AM
What a great message you send here Valsa. Love how you went through the darkness and the light shined representing hope and change to overcome illness. You have marvelously given humanity hope to overcome in your creative clever style of writing. A big congratulations on this one Valsa and a favorite from Me...Hugs and God bless you...
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Date: 11/13/2024 1:05:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. LOVE.
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Date: 11/5/2024 8:30:00 AM
God knows us inside us and knows of the way our life was to begin and end. He also knows that he endowed us with the necessary strength. His help is always with us.
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Date: 11/2/2024 4:50:00 AM
What a gripping poem you have created with your admirable eloquence and your passion foe poetry. Overcoming illness is hard, it needs us to have faith and persevere. God knows us all, he is a forgiving God, and redemption comes to the true of heart. This will do exceptionally well in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/1/2024 8:00:00 PM
An excellent description of overcoming illness. I enjoyed every word. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 11/1/2024 1:00:00 PM
Dear sweet valsa, this is so beautiful! I just love how youv written for this prompt, i just posted mine too and i cant help but admire the way youv painted imagery, made your lines rhymes in such a catchy cadence and made your lines flow in such an evocative manner! I especially felt the lines “ My life is riddled with contradictions Oh, I am waylaid, lost and beaten From every corner, I meet only oppositions” its never a constant one for anyone, life is full of riddles and puzzles, yet time always reveals tunes that can calm our inner conflicts! Brilliant take and you i kno have a heart and soul so deep that understands and grasps others feelings and maybe is why i feel your poems as you write from your heart always! Pleasure reading this: sending you light always ~ also this is a fave
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Date: 11/1/2024 11:03:00 AM
Lovely poem. Last stanza resonates with my heart.
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Date: 11/1/2024 10:58:00 AM
Life can certainly throw us some challenges Valsa but we never give up on hope. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 11/1/2024 10:44:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write you have here. Love It... Great Ending... Yes, life is a journey of both good/bad times. Have a wonderful day...............
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Date: 11/1/2024 6:05:00 AM
Beautiful poem of redemption Valsa. You always seem to have a pulse on any theme presented. I'm guessing you've lived through some things. Or you're just really empathetic. Either way your an awesome poet
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