Gift of a Friend

I remember meeting you,
I was young girl lost,
You reached your hand and showed me the entrance to twilight,
Between heaven and earth,
We dances on the crystal water, 
While the fish swam beneath us in circles, 
You taught me the language of the fairies and how to dance with black wolves,
We howled to the autumn moon,
While running through the forbidden woods
You gave me the key to life,
We soared with the angelic angels into the infinite sky,
 Reaching the stars they showed us the path to bliss, 
Swirling into the galaxy we united into one, 
Swings on vines through the jungle
Eating dinner with the lion king,
And listened to the story of Rama and Sita
But one day you fell into darkness and I chased you into the depts of space,
Reaching my hand you grabbed it,
So let us enter twilight once more between heaven and earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/3/2010 12:26:00 AM
It is magnificent beyond words. Outstandingly beautiful with a sweet melody in which you have narrated the most delicate feelings in this lovely write. It’s a Gem of a Poem. I am also thrilled by the mention of Rama and Sita in this great write my friend. It is going to be my favorite. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra.....Jamecia Buggs
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Date: 9/2/2010 10:13:00 PM
What a wonderful romantic fantasy, Jamecia. It must have been great to find someone who could provide such incredible experiences for you, even if there were just explorations in imagination. This person had a tremendous impact on you. Beautifully composed write that had me hanging on every image-filled line. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2010 10:12:00 PM
a sweet and loving write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:20:00 PM
Smile ~ "Jamecia" ~ What a very "Beautiful" name ~ And I love this magically image laced sweet poem; so colourful &, so very lovely ~ "Twilight" is a wonderful place to be; between All Things pretty & possible &, reality upon the other edge ~ "Beautiful Jamecia" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You Always, & All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Tomorrow Dear, Beyond 'The Cascading Rainbows of Love;' Bye!:) ~
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