Doris Culverhouse Poet Terza Rima

Gift Horse(Second Hand Christmas Tree)

Christmas tree full of lights
What is the problem with your center?
darkness, darkness just like nights

starless, lightless tree center
unholy curses escape, unholy lips
murderous thoughts enter

branches remove and assemble tips
try and connect an electrical
circuit, help, help light the eclipse

unoriginal, typical, abnormal deal!!

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James Fraser December 12, 2009 at 7:27 AM Not a poetry form i have heard off, nice piece >> James

Sara Kendrick December 11, 2009 at 5:04 AM Like they say don't look a gift horse in the mouth. Love the subtility of the message. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom

Jared Pickett December 10, 2009 at 9:01 AM Good visuals, full of emotion in this, the holiday season.....Good write Doris.....:JP]

Audrey Haick December 10, 2009 at 7:34 AM Take a deep breath Doris! Great write, though!! Thanks for commenting on my poem! Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Peace and love, Audrey