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Gift Horse(second hand Christmas tree)

Christmas tree full of lights What is the problem with your center? darkness, darkness just like nights starless, lightless tree center unholy curses escape, unholy lips murderous thoughts enter branches remove and assemble tips try and connect an electrical circuit, help, help light the eclipse unoriginal, typical, abnormal deal!!

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Date: 12/12/2009 7:27:00 AM
Not a poetry form i have heard off, nice piece >> James
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Date: 12/11/2009 5:04:00 AM
Like they say don't look a gift horse in the mouth. Love the subtility of the message. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom
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Date: 12/10/2009 9:01:00 AM
Good visuals, full of emotion in this, the holiday season.....Good write Doris.....:JP]
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Date: 12/10/2009 7:34:00 AM
Take a deep breath Doris! Great write, though!! Thanks for commenting on my poem! Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Peace and love, Audrey
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