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Gibraltar Crumbling

the wrath of death's hands like the lash of sea erodes the edges of my weary soul with its unseen force i am battered bruised once again emotions stir inside my core rock to sand gibraltar crumbling down i fight against time December 22, 2019 Pick A Title, Vol 12 - Diminished Hexaverse- Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 1/12/2020 1:31:00 PM
One of my favorites on the list so far. Congrats. So well done plus you picked the least likely theme for anyone to write on.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/12/2020 1:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea...i had seen a few none of which had used this line...this one spoke to my muse so i went with it... hugs :)
Date: 1/12/2020 3:58:00 AM
This is creative and metaphorically excellent, Sandra! Placing first is very much deserved....congratulations! Hugs // paul
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/12/2020 6:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Paul Hugs
Date: 1/11/2020 3:50:00 PM
Wow. Awesome. Congrats on your well deserved top honors, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Line... hugs
Date: 1/11/2020 2:56:00 PM
so much said here - emotions pour with woe yet you express so easily. Beautifully sad poem sweet Sandra, have a great night x:-)-luloo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 7:10:00 PM
Thank you so much...my emotions like to seep through my muse...hugs to you ...:)
Date: 1/11/2020 8:42:00 AM
Nicely done and congrats!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 9:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Rob :)
Date: 1/11/2020 7:35:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win, Sandra:-) Absolutely brilliant!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 9:01:00 AM
wow thank you Edward... for hosting these wonderful contests and for finding my entry worthy of a top win...i am elated :) hugs
Date: 12/29/2019 7:31:00 PM
very nicely done, Sandra, I like the emotion you leave us feeling. good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/29/2019 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve... Happy New Year... hugs
Date: 12/25/2019 3:29:00 AM
Beautiful diminished hex. A winner!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/25/2019 10:01:00 PM
Thank you so much :) hugs
Date: 12/23/2019 7:15:00 AM
Fortunate that rock has weathered every storm it has faced and so will you my friend. This was sad but beautiful. Such a creative thought is wrapped around this heart gripping poem. Best wishes in the contest
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/23/2019 7:57:00 PM
Thank you Chris....so far i have weathered all of life's storms, not unscathed but intact.... hugs
Date: 12/22/2019 11:34:00 PM
Well done on this form! Great imagery!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/23/2019 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Juliet :) hugs
Date: 12/22/2019 10:00:00 PM
Wow this is great imagery Gibraltar crumbling down wow wow powerful write!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/23/2019 7:56:00 PM
wow... thank you John....sometimes i feel like i have the strength of a rock, other times i feel like i am crumbling into a mountain of sand.... hugs :)
Date: 12/22/2019 4:52:00 PM
You painted a lovely picture with emotive words--a sure win my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/22/2019 4:56:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend... hugs
Date: 12/22/2019 1:40:00 PM
Hello Sandra Adams, oh this poem is so great. I have enjoyed this poem. I like the way you expressed yourself. merry Christmas. have a nice day my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/22/2019 4:55:00 PM
Thank you Darlene... Merry Christmas to you my friend... hugs
Date: 12/22/2019 1:26:00 PM
Great Diminished Hexaverse. Your words detail the emotion coming from inside pouring outwards
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/22/2019 4:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Greg :) hugs