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Gibraltar Crumbling

the wrath of death's hands like the lash of sea erodes the edges of my weary soul with its unseen force i am battered bruised once again emotions stir inside my core rock to sand gibraltar crumbling down i fight against time December 22, 2019 Pick A Title, Vol 12 - Diminished Hexaverse- Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2020 1:31:00 PM

One of my favorites on the list so far. Congrats. So well done plus you picked the least likely theme for anyone to write on.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/12/2020 1:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea...i had seen a few none of which had used this line...this one spoke to my muse so i went with it... hugs :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/12/2020 3:58:00 AM

This is creative and metaphorically excellent, Sandra! Placing first is very much deserved....congratulations! Hugs // paul

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/12/2020 6:52:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul Hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/11/2020 3:50:00 PM

Wow. Awesome. Congrats on your well deserved top honors, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 7:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Line... hugs

Lu Loo

Date: 1/11/2020 2:56:00 PM

so much said here - emotions pour with woe yet you express so easily. Beautifully sad poem sweet Sandra, have a great night x:-)-luloo

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 7:10:00 PM

Thank you so much...my emotions like to seep through my muse...hugs to you ...:)

Rob Carmack

Date: 1/11/2020 8:42:00 AM

Nicely done and congrats!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 9:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Rob :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/11/2020 7:35:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your top win, Sandra:-) Absolutely brilliant!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 9:01:00 AM

wow thank you Edward... for hosting these wonderful contests and for finding my entry worthy of a top win...i am elated :) hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 12/29/2019 7:31:00 PM

very nicely done, Sandra, I like the emotion you leave us feeling. good luck in the contest.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/29/2019 7:57:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve... Happy New Year... hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/25/2019 3:29:00 AM

Beautiful diminished hex. A winner!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/25/2019 10:01:00 PM

Thank you so much :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/23/2019 7:15:00 AM

Fortunate that rock has weathered every storm it has faced and so will you my friend. This was sad but beautiful. Such a creative thought is wrapped around this heart gripping poem. Best wishes in the contest

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/23/2019 7:57:00 PM

Thank you Chris....so far i have weathered all of life's storms, not unscathed but intact.... hugs

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/22/2019 11:34:00 PM

Well done on this form! Great imagery!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/23/2019 7:56:00 PM

Thank you so much Juliet :) hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 12/22/2019 10:00:00 PM

Wow this is great imagery Gibraltar crumbling down wow wow powerful write!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/23/2019 7:56:00 PM

wow... thank you John....sometimes i feel like i have the strength of a rock, other times i feel like i am crumbling into a mountain of sand.... hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/22/2019 4:52:00 PM

You painted a lovely picture with emotive words--a sure win my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/22/2019 4:56:00 PM

Thank you so very much my friend... hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/22/2019 1:40:00 PM

Hello Sandra Adams, oh this poem is so great. I have enjoyed this poem. I like the way you expressed yourself. merry Christmas. have a nice day my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/22/2019 4:55:00 PM

Thank you Darlene... Merry Christmas to you my friend... hugs

Na Na

Date: 12/22/2019 1:26:00 PM

Great Diminished Hexaverse. Your words detail the emotion coming from inside pouring outwards

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/22/2019 4:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Greg :) hugs