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Giant Slalom

With faith and hope I tackle the tricky course of my life.

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9th December, 2015
Contest: One Liner 4
Sponsor: Silent One
Placed 2nd

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

December 17, 2015 at 8:53 AM

Thanks for letting me learn a new word.. =`) Congrats PAul!!! Have A Happy Christmas! hugs and smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

Paul Callus

December 17, 2015 at 2:26 PM

Thank you Olive_eloi!!:) May you and ALL your beloved ones have a Blessed & Happy Christmas, too. ~~ Smiles :)))) & Hugss ~~ paul

Skat A

December 14, 2015 at 12:53 PM

PAUL, Congratulations on your wonderful one line win. SKAT

Paul Callus

December 14, 2015 at 3:14 PM

Many thanks, Skat:) Best regards ~~~ paul

Andrea Dietrich

December 13, 2015 at 8:05 PM

this one showed great thinking./ Congrats.

Paul Callus

December 14, 2015 at 10:20 AM

Thank you, Andrea. The aim is to make it in one piece to the finishing line:) // paul

Eve Roper

December 11, 2015 at 2:53 PM

Wonderful one liner writes, Paul, congratulations on your win!!

Paul Callus

December 11, 2015 at 3:55 PM

Thank you, Eve; your winning entry was excellent! hugs // paul

Maurice Yvonne

December 11, 2015 at 7:29 AM

One of the best of one liners in the sports topic. You never fail to please. Thank you for the read love Armand

Paul Callus

December 11, 2015 at 4:08 PM

Thank you very much, Armand. You are a positive critic:) So pleased that you are posting again, even if only sporadically! All the best. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 10, 2015 at 11:12 PM

Amazingly done Paul... the best one I read today..super 7.. congrats on big win!

Paul Callus

December 11, 2015 at 3:57 PM

You are generous, Upma:) Thank you for a lovely visit, and high rating! ~ Regards // paul

Sandra Haight

December 10, 2015 at 2:03 PM

Wonderful words for the sport but with a metaphor too! Congratulations on your nice win, Paul. Sandra

Paul Callus

December 10, 2015 at 2:24 PM

I gave my all (excuse the pun) Sandra!:) Thank you for the lovely feedback! ~ Regards // paul

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

December 10, 2015 at 2:01 PM

Congratulations Paul.

Paul Callus

December 10, 2015 at 2:14 PM

Thank you for the congrats, Nayda:) All the best. // paul

Jan Allison

December 10, 2015 at 12:09 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

December 10, 2015 at 2:08 PM

Thank you for stopping by again, Jan:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 10, 2015 at 7:00 AM

- Paul - One liners 4! - Congrats and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

December 10, 2015 at 2:03 PM

Your congrats are most welcome, Anne Lise! Thank you:) hugs // paul

Alexis Y.

December 10, 2015 at 6:43 AM

Paul, I'm so happy to see you standing on the podium with this one liner! I really enjoyed the message. Congrats on your win it was well deserved:-) Alexis

Paul Callus

December 10, 2015 at 2:01 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Alexis. It's a pleasure seeing your entry on this very same list:) ~ All the best // paul

Donna Jones

December 9, 2015 at 10:37 PM

Well said!! Bravo!

Paul Callus

December 10, 2015 at 1:59 PM

Thank you, Donna. Its a pleasure to have you back amongst us:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

December 9, 2015 at 8:49 PM

hey it's mataphoric. Awesome.

Paul Callus

December 10, 2015 at 1:58 PM

Hey, Andrea, a comment like that makes wings unfold:) Thank you! Your jet skiing has served you well:) // paul

John Lawless

December 9, 2015 at 8:43 PM

Love it Paul....a warning to all ..

Paul Callus

December 10, 2015 at 2:22 PM

Glad you liked it, John. Thank you. // paul

Tim Smith

December 9, 2015 at 2:24 PM

I like your take Paul. Weaving life along with the slalom course

Paul Callus

December 10, 2015 at 1:55 PM

Thank you Tim. This theme has given way to many inspired writes! Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

December 9, 2015 at 12:08 PM

that's the way to being a champ, paul... very uplifting, beautiful gift!..huggs

Paul Callus

December 10, 2015 at 1:29 PM

Thank you for the kind remarks, Nette:) I see that we are both on the winners' list:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 9, 2015 at 11:59 AM

- Well done for the contest, Paul - Good luck ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

December 9, 2015 at 4:10 PM

Thank you Anne Lise:) Sweet regards and hugs:) // paul

Eileen Manassian

December 9, 2015 at 10:37 AM

:) You have written this effortlessly, dear. Hugs

Paul Callus

December 9, 2015 at 4:13 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Eileen. At least I have found a bit of time to write one-liners:) I still have not posted our co-write; hope you entered it in the contest:) Hugs // paul

Alexis Y.

December 9, 2015 at 10:21 AM

Paul, I enjoyed your take on the theme. Great message too. I agree, Hope and Faith is good to have when tackling this difficult course of life. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis 7

Paul Callus

December 9, 2015 at 1:31 PM

Thank you, Alexis; I suppose I could have also added 'determination'...it's part of a winning mentality! ~ Regards // paul