Len Gasun Poet Pleiades

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16.59       Sept 27, 2025

Ghosts

Gown in white, float in air
Gag-like mouth when I stare
Give me chills, shall I run?
Go girl, ask what they want!
Good spirit or just bad
Gasp, inhale… pray to God
Growl loud, grabbing a rod!

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Sara Kendrick October 3, 2025 at 2:29 PM Ahhh!! Delightful winning work you have penned. Congratulations to you. Way to go. Sara K Len Gasun October 6, 2025 at 8:12 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Sara! God bless you always and your poetry! Hugs

Len Gasun September 30, 2025 at 7:47 PM Ghouls and Goblins Contest Judged: 9/29/2025 6:55:00 AM Sponsored by: Joseph May Place 3 ( up to 3rd p w)

Linda Alice Fowler September 30, 2025 at 8:37 AM Hello dear Len. Difficult to tell if good or bad - maybe a little of both. LOL Congratulations! :) Len Gasun September 30, 2025 at 8:10 PM lol Thanks for reading my poem today and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Linda. God bless Hugs

Joseph May September 29, 2025 at 9:00 AM Very nicely done Len, Congrats on your win in my contest Len Gasun September 30, 2025 at 7:59 PM Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Joseph May. Your acknowledgment on my poem through my win means a lot to me. Blessings to you always. Hugs