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Ghostly Shadows

Moonbeams cast shadows through my window With a ghostly dance upon the wall I am haunted by Luna's pale glow As shadows grow tall Dreams will haunt till dawn lifts the ghostly pall 5-26-2024

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Laura Leiser

Date: 5/27/2024 7:08:00 PM

Oh how the imagination haunts at night! Well done, Joseph. Great imagery! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/27/2024 4:06:00 AM

You bring to fore the dance of shadows upon the wall. Great imagery you painted for the reader, Joseph.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/27/2024 2:49:00 AM

I sleep in the dark. No moonbeams for me, but nightmares :) Lovely poem.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/26/2024 7:15:00 PM

' Moonbeams cast shadows upon the wall. ' When this happens, there will be ghostly shadows, indeed. I completely agree, Joseph. You've painted this scene so beautifully with your words. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/26/2024 6:40:00 PM

Nicely penned dear Joseph, really enjoyed this

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/26/2024 5:27:00 PM

Shadows can be scary. This is an interesting verse.

Silent One

Date: 5/26/2024 9:06:00 AM

A spooky use of the form which rhymes and flows really well..