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Ghostly Gown

The rain, insane, the floods flow down. We saw the wreck before it hit. Over storm’s head, a ghostly gown - The rain, insane, the floods flow down. Houses and boats float all aroun’. Aft’ its fury, hurricane split. The rain, insane, the floods flow down. We saw the wreck before it hit. 10/5/2022

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/7/2022 5:20:00 PM

Wonderfully written. Kim, the Poet Kitten! Great job! Pangie

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2022 6:19:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/5/2022 9:10:00 PM

Insane rain could not be more apt, Kim A clever Triolet. Sadly the content is true. Take care. Shirley

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2022 5:28:00 AM

Our time period in history drives our poetry. Thank you, Shirley!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/5/2022 8:19:00 PM

'The Rain in Dane (County) is mostly hurricane! Ta-da-da-da! ~ Rex Harrison

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2022 5:27:00 AM

:) and I can hear him singing!

Clifford Villalon

Date: 10/5/2022 2:13:00 PM

I like everybody's poem, just like yours Ma'am! Cliff

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2022 6:35:00 PM

Thank you, Cliff! Keep writing!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2022 12:47:00 PM

Great job with this form. I really like how you did this, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2022 6:33:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! These triolets are fun to write!

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/5/2022 11:15:00 AM

Well done! Quite a bit of fury expressed in a few, very emotive lines. We pray for those suffering the effects. Blessings to all.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/5/2022 9:02:00 AM

This is a super fine triolet, Kim, aptly describing the destruction of Ian in a few words. Excellent.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/5/2022 7:12:00 AM

I admire the way you constructed this triolet. The Lord knows how I sweated to write mine.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2022 7:08:00 AM

Good one in light of the recent terrible hurricane. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this contest entry today. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2022 6:41:00 AM

- Strong forces of nature ... a picture that is easy to imagine ... excellently written, Kim :) - hugs