Kim Rodrigues Poet Triolet

Ghostly Gown

The rain, insane, the floods flow down.
We saw the wreck before it hit.
Over storm’s head, a ghostly gown -
The rain, insane, the floods flow down.
Houses and boats float all aroun’.
Aft’ its fury, hurricane split.
The rain, insane, the floods flow down.
We saw the wreck before it hit.

10/5/2022

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Panagiota Romios October 7, 2022 at 5:20 PM Wonderfully written. Kim, the Poet Kitten! Great job! Pangie Kim Rodrigues October 7, 2022 at 6:19 PM Thank you, my friend!

Shirley Hawkins October 5, 2022 at 9:10 PM Insane rain could not be more apt, Kim A clever Triolet. Sadly the content is true. Take care. Shirley Kim Rodrigues October 6, 2022 at 5:28 AM Our time period in history drives our poetry. Thank you, Shirley!

Gershon Wolf October 5, 2022 at 8:19 PM 'The Rain in Dane (County) is mostly hurricane! Ta-da-da-da! ~ Rex Harrison Kim Rodrigues October 6, 2022 at 5:27 AM :) and I can hear him singing!

Clifford Villalon October 5, 2022 at 2:13 PM I like everybody's poem, just like yours Ma'am! Cliff Kim Rodrigues October 5, 2022 at 6:35 PM Thank you, Cliff! Keep writing!

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2022 at 12:47 PM Great job with this form. I really like how you did this, Kim. Kim Rodrigues October 5, 2022 at 6:33 PM Thank you, Andrea! These triolets are fun to write!

Joseph P. DiMino October 5, 2022 at 11:15 AM Well done! Quite a bit of fury expressed in a few, very emotive lines. We pray for those suffering the effects. Blessings to all.

L Milton Hankins October 5, 2022 at 9:02 AM This is a super fine triolet, Kim, aptly describing the destruction of Ian in a few words. Excellent.

Victor Buhagiar October 5, 2022 at 7:12 AM I admire the way you constructed this triolet. The Lord knows how I sweated to write mine.

Sara Kendrick October 5, 2022 at 7:08 AM Good one in light of the recent terrible hurricane. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this contest entry today. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2022 at 6:41 AM - Strong forces of nature ... a picture that is easy to imagine ... excellently written, Kim :) - hugs