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Virginia Mitchell

Ghost Tides Contest

haunted stones cower
gray mist shrouds the ocean's edge
hopes for fishing die

Copyright © Virginia Mitchell | Year Posted 2010

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Andrea Dietrich

March 1, 2010 at 10:21 PM

I like how you worked a little tale into this one. Congratulations! lUv, andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

February 26, 2010 at 5:15 PM

Virginia, This haiku is a beautiful entry and I am so glad it was recognized in the winner's circle. Congratulations! Blessings, Connie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 26, 2010 at 4:56 PM

Congratulations and kudos! Virginia, you are in the winners’ circle with your haiku entry in Ghost Tides Sponsored by: Raul Moreno. "Haunted stones cower..." is my favorite part. Keep those creative words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

February 24, 2010 at 10:08 AM

I think this is very good, Virginia! My congratulations to you on your win in the contest. Peace, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 24, 2010 at 3:38 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ghost Tides Contest Virginia. Love, Carol

February 23, 2010 at 5:34 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 23, 2010 at 4:49 PM

Congrats Virginia on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful victory for an amazing write.. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

February 23, 2010 at 2:32 PM

You have me smiling with your last line. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

February 23, 2010 at 1:40 PM

Different and I enjoyed it. Congrats on your success in the contest. BG

February 23, 2010 at 1:34 PM

Virginia, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

February 23, 2010 at 3:07 AM

Great idea to write about from the picture. Should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

February 21, 2010 at 3:08 AM

so well written!

Eleanore Bourner

February 20, 2010 at 7:38 PM

excellent, good luck :) ------Ell

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