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Ghost Of Another Part Two

   Sun-streaked topaz,
    of faint silhouette,
               woman gulping phrases,
           uncanny mirror’s orbital,
           of resonance,
             in blind recess,
      seeing, hearing icicled image,
         psychic  blobs melt,
          in close locus,
       hair-raising halo,
          hallucinate my opal eyes,
         sultry smokescape,
                 furnace of,
             walnut garland,
      from  ambling  weeper,
whose shaken trauma,
    I shudder and pine for,
      at red coal pit of,
        my  abdominal agony,
       this lava veiled,
   human’s sideswipe,
“you remind me of someone,”
   whilst being eclipsed,
     by vanilla vapours,
    in a hazy billow,
   rippling stream heart,
inducing isthmus of,
      harrowing  bereavement,
       blue vault fluke 
        surreal concoction,  
         shrouded in mystique,
              enigmatic shroud,
                shrouded pang,
             otherworldly episode
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September 3, 2026 at 10:55 AM
- Your description here gives the reader images... although it is difficult to put into words what really happens via spirits or supernatural beings that no longer belong to our physical world, Howard - I have posted a true story (short version) on the same topic today :) - hugs
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