Ghost Apparition

Ghost apparition Covering the full moon, night sky Shows cobalt through it

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/12/2009 8:55:00 AM

did you know you have several poems on the hot poems list!! congratulations!!

Dawn Murphy

Date: 9/7/2009 1:01:00 PM

Interesting and very well descriptive. Leaves lots to my imagination.

Dawn Murphy

Date: 9/7/2009 12:31:00 PM

Interesting. Very short but left me thinking lots of things sort of like imagining the rest of the story. Like you saw the above then left, and I came along and saw it continuing.

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/6/2009 10:57:00 AM

Beautiful imagery here Sara, and thank you for your comments on my poem Viola..they are greatly appreciated.

James Fraser

Date: 9/6/2009 8:26:00 AM

Haunting Haiku Sara, nice one>>James

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/6/2009 5:34:00 AM

Hahahahah! This is so funny about ghosts. I can see it clearly, especially the goblins, witches on brooms and everything else. Great job! ~Joseph

Jayne Eggins

Date: 9/6/2009 12:14:00 AM

Sara this is one of the most beautiful haiku's I have read in a while,I enjoyed this one immensely ... Kind Regards Jayne x x

P Sheart

Date: 9/5/2009 9:58:00 PM

Hi Sara Excellent Haiku! Gave me chills reading it. Great visual... I was just looking through your poetry, wow, you've done a lot of writing! Been working really hard. Good work sweet. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia