Ghost Apparition

Ghost apparition
Covering the full moon, night sky
Shows cobalt through it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 8:55 AM
did you know you have several poems on the hot poems list!! congratulations!!
Murphy Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 1:01 PM
Interesting and very well descriptive. Leaves lots to my imagination.
Murphy Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Interesting. Very short but left me thinking lots of things sort of like imagining the rest of the story. Like you saw the above then left, and I came along and saw it continuing.
Rider Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 10:57 AM
Beautiful imagery here Sara, and thank you for your comments on my poem Viola..they are greatly appreciated.
Fraser Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 8:26 AM
Haunting Haiku Sara, nice one>>James
Spence Sr Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 5:34 AM
Hahahahah! This is so funny about ghosts. I can see it clearly, especially the goblins, witches on brooms and everything else. Great job! ~Joseph
Eggins Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 12:14 AM
Sara this is one of the most beautiful haiku's I have read in a while,I enjoyed this one immensely ... Kind Regards Jayne x x
Sheart Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 9:58 PM
Hi Sara Excellent Haiku! Gave me chills reading it. Great visual... I was just looking through your poetry, wow, you've done a lot of writing! Been working really hard. Good work sweet. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 8:50 PM
Beautiful Haiku Sara, God Bless, Sincerely Moses
Goff Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 6:01 PM
I believe!...good haiku! Sara!...jim
Page Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 4:22 PM
cool poem. short but some much presence!! love it. Autumn
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September 5, 2009 at 3:39 PM
Oooh! Love it! Keep on writing, Sara! Blessings, Donna
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