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Getting Serious

I wonder: Can I look into your eyes and mean it when I say that knowing you will make me never long for another? Let me say (instead?): There is (with you) a greater degree of contentment and commitment than I have ever allowed or enjoyed. I could say: My love for you is focused as logic, giddy as champagne, warm as a hot tub and bright and burning as a laser. More honestly: The strain of love’s a medley of changes – no lullaby, but a rising, swelling dedication, that bridges to an unwavering march. Surrounded by elaborate and colorful pageantry that winds a route completely impromptu for which we are totally unrehearsed, our hearts, drumming within the cavalcade, synchronize to the parade’s harmony, while we hold each other in steadfast step.

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Date: 5/30/2012 6:24:00 AM
Wow James...love this poem and how you have presented it. Well done!
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Date: 5/1/2012 7:38:00 PM
Smile ˜ I Love This Completely & Yessss, Getting Quite Serious * My Love, Forever, John!:) ˜
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Date: 5/1/2012 7:44:00 PM
...."An Intense Favourite In Sheer Heartfelt Beauty." *

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