Getting On - Autumn

GETTING ON - autumn

three big white ducks
waddle into our backyard
omen?

like pollack splashes
flakes of gold crowd everywhere
sudden chill

a subtle change of mood
beautiful eerie silence
reflection

cat in the window
just looking out
sensing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/28/2012 9:10:00 AM
what mood you've set for autumn then winter. love, Kathy
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Date: 9/25/2012 2:51:00 PM
Enjoyed this one..I could just see the cat..The change of the direction or angle of the sun is what I like about fall...Enjoyed reading...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/23/2012 11:00:00 AM
Could relate to the contemplative "air here" In this write Daver, (well put indeed)
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Date: 9/22/2012 5:58:00 PM
Really like the second one. Great combination.
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Date: 9/19/2012 9:20:00 AM
Hey Daver! Whoa...never heard of a duck omen.:) They'd come by to see you cause they know you're kind! Enjoying this write, Daver...the last verse with the cat "looking out, sensing" adds to this "errie silence". Ah, I love autumn! Thought of you today, a big marmalade cat walked past Kiwi who'd been taking a leak. Kiwi finished quickly and walked over to see the cat, when it stopped to fix the dog with a 'look', Kiwi turned about and got busy looking at other things.:) Love you! Mikki
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Date: 9/17/2012 10:08:00 PM
This really captures the mood of the season, Daver. you be the man!!!! Keep enchanting us with your poetry.
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Date: 9/17/2012 2:38:00 PM
Daver, i'm waiting here for this sense to pass my window enjoyed.. .. always~ PD
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