Get-Down Let-Down

GET-DOWN LET-DOWN

He took rhino muzzle excrescence
For boost of his hoped for tumescence
But in spite of big dose
From a pachyderm‘s nose
It was useless with no acquiescence 

29 June 2019
For Humorous Limerick Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 10:18 PM
Even the elephants have hopped onto the "Me-Too" bandwagon LOL. Nice one, Geoffrey. :) gw
Breidenthal Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 2:07 AM
Fantastic poetry! Adored every line. -JWE
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July 16, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Many thanks for the response, J.W. I suspect that others didn’t get it.
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