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Get romantic

come now darling wife
surrender yourself to me
pity you're not mine

Created and submitted 4th march 2015 for competition 
'Get Romantic'- Visual number two.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/4/2015 6:56:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful! Its a blessed and wonderful weekend for me, chilling out with poetic lines so fine and touching
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/4/2015 7:31:00 AM
Thanks for popping by, Funom. Viv
Date: 3/13/2015 7:55:00 PM
Brilliant romantic write, Viv!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2015 3:02:00 AM
Thanks, Lyric man.
Date: 3/11/2015 5:41:00 PM
Nice way to get romantic, grats on your contest placement . :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/12/2015 2:15:00 AM
Many thanks Casarah x
Date: 3/9/2015 10:02:00 PM
Haha...I love the romance mixed with humor...congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/10/2015 12:58:00 AM
Thanks, Rhonda. Love can sometimes be like the plasticene we had at school- warm and soft, but with a drawing pin in it every now and then x
Date: 3/8/2015 6:20:00 PM
VIV, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/10/2015 12:57:00 AM
Thanks,SKAT. Enjoying the occasional challenge. And giving myself a WooHoo! beats a cash prize any day x
Date: 3/8/2015 11:58:00 AM
Viv, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/8/2015 2:48:00 PM
Thanks, Linda, but any kudos pale into insignificance compared to the joy and blessing recently bestowed upon you. Lovely things, sunshine, little burps, cheeky grins, funny smells, tiny clutching fingers, silky new wisps of hair, innocent gazes, private warmth, snotty noses , immense pride and a gift beyond compare to you and yours x
Date: 3/7/2015 2:55:00 PM
Love your take on the image congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2015 6:05:00 AM
So interesting Viv...'pity you're not mine' great intriguing..loved it. Congrats on your deserved win...rajat
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Date: 3/6/2015 11:52:00 PM
I was trying to guess the meaning of this one. Was he saying this to his wife because he knows that she is cheating on him? is that what the third line means? Congrats in my contest.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/7/2015 1:57:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I suppose it's a double-edged sword: my take on the last line was that she was someone else's wife, but the 'darling' in the first line was to initially mislead. Anyway, he's a very very naughty boy x
Date: 3/4/2015 9:00:00 AM
I see a love triangle looming! Wonder if she knows! / paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/7/2015 2:59:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win, Viv!! // paul
Date: 3/4/2015 6:08:00 AM
YIKES!! Run......
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/4/2015 6:38:00 AM
Thanks, Lyric Man. I wouldn't condone such behaviour- I value my dangly bits too much :)
Date: 3/4/2015 2:17:00 AM
Interesting play on your haiku, I see a touch of humor! Good luck in the contest! Kim
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/4/2015 6:39:00 AM
thanks, Kim x