Get Out of My Face!

Get Out of My Face!

What brought all of that on?
Award?  This is not a movie!
Who cares about a stupid award?
And how dare you judge me like that?
You must have lost your brains –
Yes, I see them now!
Right in front of your face
Floating around in the bubble
On your head!  
And you say you love me.
Yeah, right!
And since when did this spaceship
Become yours?  Get a grip.
You want me off of this rust trap?
Right after you, baby!
Oh, who made you judge and jury?
You do not even know what love is.
You are a suck-up.
But you just lost your brownie points.
Do you call screaming at a cohort?
“Love of humanity”
I see it again!
Grey matter scrambled like eggs.  Yum!
I remember when –
You used to eat men alive and brag.
Have you really changed all that much?
You still gloat with words?
Even now, you think you have won.
My dear raging “Power hog”,
Turn the light bulb on…think!
We are in deep space.
What do you think 
Will happen to your prize, 
If I do get off?
I can see it now.
You, Spaceman of the Year,
Worming your way out of the spot light
When T.S. asks you,
“What happened? 
That cute Elaine Justice disappeared?”
Um, well, a…she left the ship.
Really now?
And why was that?
Imagine stumbling your egocentric-self
Right out of your award.
Genuinely, who really cares?
Not I! Said the woman
That still had her brains.
It is time for you to get off.
Love of humanity, or me for that matter,
Is something you know nothing
About…Now, get out of my face!

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
May 20, 2010
Poetic form:  Free Verse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/31/2010 12:05:00 PM
Wow, Dane Ann - i would never have thought you would have written this piece. It's pretty impressive. Many congratulations on your 4th place in Matt's contest >> James
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Date: 5/22/2010 9:14:00 AM
I admit I was curious with your title--didn't seem to link it to you & then I knew it was for Matt's contest! Very interesting poem & I'm sure it would do great in the contest! :)
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Date: 5/22/2010 8:49:00 AM
Wow, Dane! I hope that person gets out of your face. I can feel your anger and frustration. I hope today finds you feeling more at peace. :-)
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Date: 5/22/2010 7:18:00 AM
Very funny entry for the contest, Dane Ann!! Enjoyed the humor very much. Best wishes for the contest. Love, carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2010 7:47:00 PM
oh wow ;) such fire!!! love it. been away from the soup for too long. thanks for reading my poem again and thanks for posting this ;)
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Date: 5/21/2010 12:31:00 PM
Oh yeah Dane!!! I can see the fire in your eyes. I bet you get a place with this one! Light & Love
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Date: 5/21/2010 9:43:00 AM
I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Dane Ann. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2010 6:27:00 AM
I enjoyed your anger. Nice expressions
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Date: 5/20/2010 11:22:00 PM
very very well controlled anger or at least no bad or profain language a true sport of the language,,tell them willingly and right for sure,,great one,,I enjoyed greatly and have total respect even now more then before,,,and thank You for all the words that you have left behind upon mine and if for the contest,,best of luck,,,Blessings..Cecil
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