Gerber With a Kick

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Pumping Vitamin A, into my blood,
and potassium. Pretty pumpkin
mixed with berries, yogurt and silk.
Sipping the Autumn cocktail preposterously.
Potential for vigor, chilling, and best day.
Orange concoction of maturity,
or it could be called Gerber with a kick.
My baby sister would be appalled 
as she often is at my fruitiness.
She almost lost her grip, when instead
of chips and dip, I craved tropical fruit,
when i was sick. Jack O is a flame -
just dessert. Orange pancakes in my future,
unless my sister locks me up.

9/29/2022

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Date: 10/4/2022 9:29:00 AM
Now I want orange pancakes Kim. I have to stop reading and go eat, and I have to give you full credit.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2022 3:57:00 PM
Drizzle that pancake with some maple syrup…tis the right time of year ;)
Date: 9/29/2022 5:41:00 PM
Throw a shot of vodka in there too, Kim. A babysitter at my friend's house did. He was wondering why his kids went to sleep right away that night. lol. ~ Stolichnaya
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2022 7:22:00 PM
What? They didn’t ask for more?
Date: 9/29/2022 5:10:00 PM
You would hit it off with my wife Sara, Kim. Your poem will have her on a tare. :-) I like the tropical fruit part best ... but I would add whipped cream. :-) Have a blessed day my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2022 7:22:00 PM
Awesome! Thank you!
Date: 9/29/2022 9:15:00 AM
You remind me of the days many years ago when I was in Brazil and for breakfast we had a choice. English breakfast or tropical fruit. I chose the latter. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2022 11:03:00 AM
I loved every day on the cruise ship having yummy fresh fruit…call me weird. lol. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 9/29/2022 7:40:00 AM
This time of year it's pumpkin and spice everywhere.My daughter and I happened to be in grocery at same time.She said "Hey mom,they have pumpkin spice toilet tissue on aisle three.Are you kidding me?,my gullible response.She laughed and said yeah,for now.No doubt it's coming. Enjoyed your festive fall write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2022 7:42:00 AM
LOL! So funny! Spice might cause the need for a roll ;)
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