George

He hand-hefted garbage cans,
Dumping the debris onto a truck.
He was one of life's "also rans"—
A boozer, a loser, absent of luck.

His name was George, some say.
But "Wino" was his "given" name.
Gulped a gallon-plus every day,
Yet he seemed reasonably sane.

Years without protein did him in—
Bones were as brittle as glass.
He fell one day when drunk as sin
And collapsed into a mangled mass.

I wonder who picked up the pieces
Of a life that had gone all askew.
No brothers, no aunts, no nieces
No one to claim George's residue.

That fact should not come as news.
While he lived, none came to his aid.
It wasn't for the absence of clues;
They marched in the "me" parade.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/7/2015 8:32:00 PM
Excellent pen Paul! Very sad reading your piece about George, that happens to many folks around, addiction is a killer of lives , my dear friend. A 7 from me! Enjoy your day! In His light! God bless! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/7/2015 9:07:00 PM
Dorian, your kind words (as I have probably said before but in a different way) ring sweetly in my ears. "Thank you" doesn't seem sufficient, but, anyway, thank you. And "Love n hugs!" to you, too.
Date: 2/7/2015 7:04:00 PM
Vivid imagery in this sad write on addiction Paul:-( Hugs jan xx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/7/2015 8:52:00 PM
Lindsay, you speak words of wisdom, in addition to making me feel wonderful by commenting on my poem proper. So, thank you and thank you again.
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 7:49:00 PM
yes we have a friend who is an alcoholic - have written several poems about her addiction :-( Hugs jan xx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/7/2015 7:44:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Watching people slowly kill themselves is painful in the extreme. Watching people slowly kill themselves while making no effort to help them is akin to moral suicide. But, of course, the addicted cannot be helped unless they want to be free of their addiction. All of which you already know, but (forgive me), I had to say it.
Date: 2/7/2015 7:03:00 PM
G'day Paul... Really enjoyed your poem with its structure, and the topic reminds most of us that we have known a 'George' at some time. They appear to be the life of the party in a crowd, but their party doesn't stop when alone. Thanks Paul - Lindsay
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/7/2015 9:15:00 PM
I apologize to Lindsay and Jan for misplacing my responses. I assure them, however, that I have not been drinking.
Date: 2/7/2015 6:51:00 PM
Wonderful! "He fell one day when drunk as sin And collapsed into a mangled mass." What a line!
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Date: 2/7/2015 9:10:00 PM
Nirode, Thank you for commenting on that line, though I confess it sounds a tad heartless.
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