Geoffrey C Goldfish





                    Adore my goldfish 
                    Swimming happily so sweet
                    Wavy gorgeous fins
                    Two intent amorous eyes 
                    My aquatic treat

         



                          May 22, 2020
                              9am PST

                          Poem # 1287


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May 22, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Very nice Panagiota. I love fish too and keep a 30 gal, aquarium. So beautiful. This made me smile. Well done. God Bless and stay well. JB
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May 22, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Judy, I love that you do that. It's peaceful, awesome and shows you have a big heat, my friend. Love your visiting! Panagiota xoxo
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May 22, 2020 at 12:30 PM
They are so relaxing to watch Panagiota. Tom, Love the name.
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May 22, 2020 at 12:55 PM
Yes, Tom ~rather a majestic name for a fish. Glad you liked it. )))) Hey, Tom..this is my first Tanka. Huzzah! Blessings be yours, Panagiota xoxo
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May 22, 2020 at 12:11 PM
Sweetness! Enjoyed this very much; reading it out loud to my goldfish... Calliope and Darth. ;), xomo
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May 22, 2020 at 1:36 PM
Confession, Darth Maul came with the name, my girlfriend's kid's fish, he outgrew his bowl (I killed Darth Vader) I told him if he lived long enough I'd get him a friend. He did :)))
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May 22, 2020 at 12:51 PM
You are killing me with laughter and gratitude. Love the creative names for your fish..how adorable! But totally. Bless you, my friend for commenting. Panagiota xoxo
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