Genuine Smile

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"I smiled when" reflecting last smile, Authentic aching belly laugh Contemplating its been a while Evident on a photograph Type of smile, aches across your face Forced upon smile is without grace, Genuine smiles reflect the soul Spontaneous minus control ~ When I smiled, aching belly smile Reflecting authentic laugh last, Evident on a while its been Contemplating a photograph When you're selected to partake, Practice to ensure it's not fake.

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2020 9:47:00 AM

oh there is someone who was in my life who i would have loved to take a lie detector test - she is such an expert liar I think she has a degree in it lol, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/13/2020 12:47:00 PM

:-) thank you for taking the time to read my poem. X

Charles Messina

Date: 10/13/2020 8:00:00 AM

Joanna, I really enjoyed your poem. Unfortunately the last stanza was off or this would have placed higher in my contest. Thanks for entering and Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Stay well...Charlie

Joanna Feltham
Date: 10/13/2020 8:08:00 AM

Sorry about that. I really enjoyed this contest. Thank you for my placement. I've changed it now. :-)