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It takes a leap in faith to view life differently. Whatever is shown on a specific story screen. Consider a chutzpah of a mad tantrum coherently. Moving forth implies that I crave to be seen. Whatever is shown on a specific story screen. To scale the peak and survey the scene below. Moving forth implies that I crave to be seen. Utterly, to view more peace than hate grows. To scale the peak and survey the scene below. Kindness over wrath, brightness over darkness Utterly, to view more peace than hate grows. Fear falls the same as cosmic dust lit our sharpness. Kindness over wrath, brightness over darkness Your eyes are clear to show your heart and head. Fear falls the same as cosmic dust lit our sharpness. Your thoughts are intertwined with dread. Your eyes are clear to show your heart and head. Consider a chutzpah of a mad tantrum coherently. Your thoughts are intertwined with dread. It takes a leap in faith to view life differently.
Written: December 08, 2022

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Date: 12/9/2022 5:25:00 AM
Endearing thoughts my friend. This sums up beautifully for me: Kindness over wrath, brightness over darkness...
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Date: 12/9/2022 1:48:00 AM
Good emotions should rule our hearts.
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Date: 12/8/2022 8:34:00 PM
When we take a leap in faith to view life differently, kindness over wrath, brightness over darkness and peace over hate, will become our priorities. Profound thoughts !
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Date: 12/8/2022 8:29:00 PM
Oh, this is so good, Lasaad, the positivity, the message, comes through each and every word, yes the whole poem, oozes faith.
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