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Gently Teases

A magical veil exists of dreams That builds a hearts great desire All wishes come true it seems Where great love always aspires Where fairytales can be seen An imaginary place wishes want Not light nor dark it's in between Where colors are most vibrant On those horizons I reach for you Wishing I could pull you so close Dark skies caress those of blue Alas our lost love always echos This place where night kisses light Above on heavens gentle breezes It's there that your still in sight Memory of you still gently teases

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Date: 5/30/2020 7:22:00 AM
Super piece Brenda, lovely rhyme and fine imagery too. Good to catch up with you again, hope all is well with you, I had my latest PSA blood test yesterday so get result next week. Blessings always,Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/30/2020 10:12:00 AM
Gordon so happy you liked it! Plus glad to hear from you! Let me know on the testing ok?;)
Date: 5/26/2020 8:22:00 AM
Lovely one...looking through the eyes of love
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/27/2020 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Arturo greatly appreciated!;)
Date: 5/26/2020 4:51:00 AM
You haven't lost your romantic touch Brenda nice to see you back. I hope you are well. Tom
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/27/2020 1:22:00 PM
Ahh Tom thank you I appreciate that!;)
Date: 5/26/2020 3:36:00 AM
a charming romantic rhyme that flows so beautifully Brenda, these things can happen in our dreams:-) so good to see you back on soup, you have been missed:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/27/2020 1:21:00 PM
Jan thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!;)

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