Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

Gently Cuddling Night

Trails 
of night
bring rays
one  by  one; 
sparkling air -
breaths quieting 
calm and  fragrant…
stars  glisten hours as
blown  prayers lift sighs
that,  mildly wisped,
 doubt is undone.
Joy   restores
spirit tired
cuddling
gently

Night.

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Night

gently
cuddling
tired spirit
restores joy.
Undone is doubt,
wisped mildly, that,
sights lift prayers blown
as hours glisten stars
fragrant and calm...
quieting breaths
air sparkling -
one by one ;
rays bring
night of 
Trails.


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Backwards Poem
for Brian's Select 7

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John Hamilton August 17, 2016 at 12:50 PM Just a wonderful poem, so so difficult this form, I couldn't do one, so I applaud your talent!

Laura Leiser August 16, 2016 at 2:42 PM Very pretty poem, Nette. Congrats on your win:)

Jan Allison August 16, 2016 at 2:20 PM beautiful flow to both poems Netter - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman August 16, 2016 at 12:44 PM One of the best I've read Nette. Reads smoothly in both directions and has great content.

Sunita U.D Palawon August 16, 2016 at 11:51 AM Congrats on your placement. Enjoyed the read. :) Sunita

Sandra Haight August 16, 2016 at 11:43 AM Lovely, Nette - both ways! Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2016 at 11:28 AM Your poem shapes up nicely! Congratulations on your top win!

Beautiful Scars August 16, 2016 at 11:17 AM Nette! so beautiful lady, I love the layout and the flow was perfect and what I was looking for. Congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

James Marshall Goff August 5, 2016 at 9:27 AM wow.....will print and post to my poetry board at home! very cool! the second diamond is my favorite, with a soft opening....lines 5/6/7 of both diamonds are very exciting! jimbo

CayCay Godwin August 5, 2016 at 8:09 AM I am impressed that anyone can do this form, my brain goes crazy when I try and I end up cross-eyed. I am especially impressed when the form contents are meaningful and of matter that touches me. Yours does just that, especially the 2nd verse ... CayCay

John Hamilton August 4, 2016 at 10:03 PM Just wonderful writing Nette, is it sighs or sights? A very difficult assignment I would not even try to attempt, but you did it with ease!

Daniel Turner August 4, 2016 at 3:17 PM Nette, is there anything you can't write? Well done as usual. I admire your talent for poetry. It is truly a gift. Thank you for sharing.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 4, 2016 at 2:31 PM - A lovely backwards poems, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manny Paras August 4, 2016 at 2:25 PM Yes, every majestic poem from you is a total experience. Woman, I share the sparkle of this lustrous night!

Rhoma Em August 4, 2016 at 1:52 PM Goodness, tremendous description of a night gentle and brimming with creativity. Your talent as a poet is unquestionable!