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Gentle Undertones

gentle undertones parting brown leaves from trees picturesque scene Contest: A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn) Sponsor: Rick Parise

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2012 10:25:00 AM

I keep clicking on poems. I think I have seen even all your oldies!! Hey, Russell is taking haiku for his autumn splendor contest. I used a haiku about leaves, an oldie like this one of yours. You could enter this lovely haiku and it would work too!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 4:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Wilma in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:45:00 PM

lovely, congrats on your HM in the contest

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/6/2010 2:31:00 PM

an excellent picture Wilma. I enjoyed it.Funny how the word "picturesque" actually makes one picture . Congrats to you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 11:22:00 AM

WEll, congratualtions on the HM, Wilma. Sorry I dont' have time to be here much this weekned. I am trying, but already I have to get off here yet again!! Nice to see your win here. LUv, Andrea

David Smalling

Date: 9/6/2010 10:41:00 AM

How do you feel an imagery ... you made me. Great write

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/5/2010 9:06:00 PM

Many congratulations dear Wilma for HM for this lovely work

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/5/2010 8:02:00 PM

My congratulations on the HM in Rick's "Leaf In The Wind" Contest, Wilma! Love, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 7:10:00 PM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Wilma

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/5/2010 5:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, dear Wilma. Love, iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 5:21:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your HM in Rick's contest... a lovely poem and a special honor my friend to enjoy tonight with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/5/2010 5:04:00 PM

Good for you Wilma..congrats on your success in the contest. BG

James Fraser

Date: 9/4/2010 11:29:00 AM

Now that autumn has arrived Wilma, your lovely Haiku will be happening the world over >> James

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/31/2010 5:19:00 AM

Wow, Wilma, sorry but I wasn't able to write comments on Soup. Had to do a lot of things and now I am waiting for my visitors. Very nice Haiku, yes, now summer has nearly ended and we hope to get some nice autum days. It is cold today and rainy!! Best of luck in Rick's contest and have abright week!...Thank you for all your kind comments!..Sterkte en sien jou gou! Gert

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/31/2010 2:43:00 AM

excellent Haiku here, good luck in contest. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2010 10:29:00 PM

Very nice, Wilma. Nice seeing your comment today. LUv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/30/2010 2:43:00 PM

Great entry!!! you talent shines through in this winner...luv MicHAEL

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/30/2010 10:22:00 AM

Very nicely worded haiku filled with both images and emotion, Wilma. Indeed, fall is the most picturesque season in many parts of the country. Florida sees little change from season to season. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/30/2010 8:41:00 AM

lovely , good luck in the contest