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Gentle Undertones

gentle undertones 
parting brown leaves from trees 
picturesque scene







Contest: A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)
Sponsor: Rick Parise

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Andrea Dietrich

August 26, 2012 at 10:25 AM

I keep clicking on poems. I think I have seen even all your oldies!! Hey, Russell is taking haiku for his autumn splendor contest. I used a haiku about leaves, an oldie like this one of yours. You could enter this lovely haiku and it would work too!

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 7, 2010 at 4:05 AM

Congratulations on your win Wilma in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

September 6, 2010 at 4:45 PM

lovely, congrats on your HM in the contest

Robert A. Dufresne

September 6, 2010 at 2:31 PM

an excellent picture Wilma. I enjoyed it.Funny how the word "picturesque" actually makes one picture . Congrats to you

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2010 at 11:22 AM

WEll, congratualtions on the HM, Wilma. Sorry I dont' have time to be here much this weekned. I am trying, but already I have to get off here yet again!! Nice to see your win here. LUv, Andrea

David Smalling

September 6, 2010 at 10:41 AM

How do you feel an imagery ... you made me. Great write

Tahera Mannan

September 5, 2010 at 9:06 PM

Many congratulations dear Wilma for HM for this lovely work

Audrey Haick

September 5, 2010 at 8:02 PM

My congratulations on the HM in Rick's "Leaf In The Wind" Contest, Wilma! Love, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 5, 2010 at 7:10 PM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Wilma

Iolanda Scripca

September 5, 2010 at 5:32 PM

Congratulations on your win, dear Wilma. Love, iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 5, 2010 at 5:21 PM

Congrats Wilma on your HM in Rick's contest... a lovely poem and a special honor my friend to enjoy tonight with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

September 5, 2010 at 5:04 PM

Good for you Wilma..congrats on your success in the contest. BG

James Fraser

September 4, 2010 at 11:29 AM

Now that autumn has arrived Wilma, your lovely Haiku will be happening the world over >> James

Gert W. Knop

August 31, 2010 at 5:19 AM

Wow, Wilma, sorry but I wasn't able to write comments on Soup. Had to do a lot of things and now I am waiting for my visitors. Very nice Haiku, yes, now summer has nearly ended and we hope to get some nice autum days. It is cold today and rainy!! Best of luck in Rick's contest and have abright week!...Thank you for all your kind comments!..Sterkte en sien jou gou! Gert

Harry Horsman

August 31, 2010 at 2:43 AM

excellent Haiku here, good luck in contest. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2010 at 10:29 PM

Very nice, Wilma. Nice seeing your comment today. LUv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

August 30, 2010 at 2:43 PM

Great entry!!! you talent shines through in this winner...luv MicHAEL

Carolyn Devonshire

August 30, 2010 at 10:22 AM

Very nicely worded haiku filled with both images and emotion, Wilma. Indeed, fall is the most picturesque season in many parts of the country. Florida sees little change from season to season. Love, Carolyn