L Milton Hankins Poet Monorhyme

Gentle Squeezes

Light and airy summer breezes
Make short shrift of springtime sneezes,
Warm and thoughtful gentle squeezes
Undo ill-tempered moody freezes,
A welcomed smile much tension eases
If we would always do what pleases. 

Written May 27, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger June 2, 2022 at 4:16 AM I love it when you do monorhyme, Hank. because I sense that you enjoy them! L Milton Hankins June 2, 2022 at 9:38 AM I do, and you have always challenged me to try them more often. You write such challenging ones.

Bill Baker May 27, 2022 at 5:09 PM Nice Monorhyme, Milt. I especially liked the double alliteration in line 2. Make short shrift of springtime sneezes, Write On! my friend. Bill L Milton Hankins May 27, 2022 at 5:37 PM Thanks, Bill. I was really just entertaining myself with this one.

Tom Cunningham May 27, 2022 at 12:32 PM Sometimes we just get dragged out of our comfort zone reluctantly. Tom L Milton Hankins May 27, 2022 at 12:34 PM So true, Tom, so true. Thanks for the comment.