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Gentle Squeezes

Light and airy summer breezes Make short shrift of springtime sneezes, Warm and thoughtful gentle squeezes Undo ill-tempered moody freezes, A welcomed smile much tension eases If we would always do what pleases.
Written May 27, 2022

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Date: 6/2/2022 4:16:00 AM
I love it when you do monorhyme, Hank. because I sense that you enjoy them!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 9:38:00 AM
I do, and you have always challenged me to try them more often. You write such challenging ones.
Date: 5/27/2022 5:09:00 PM
Nice Monorhyme, Milt. I especially liked the double alliteration in line 2. Make short shrift of springtime sneezes, Write On! my friend. Bill
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/27/2022 5:37:00 PM
Thanks, Bill. I was really just entertaining myself with this one.
Date: 5/27/2022 12:32:00 PM
Sometimes we just get dragged out of our comfort zone reluctantly. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/27/2022 12:34:00 PM
So true, Tom, so true. Thanks for the comment.

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