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Gentle On My Mind

Gentle on My Mind

You play along the edges, 
of every memory worth having. 
You have been there since, 
I care to look back. 
I was stupid, 
fearful, 
distrustful, 
and dangerous. 

You… ever were patient, 
kind, and slow to anger, 
walking a measured gait. 

Cowboy, 
You speak in a voice, 
that melts my heart. 
but your real words, 
more often are unvoiced,
but always felt, 
tangibly… changing
the fixed temperament 
left behind, 
in the wake of users, 
defilers of dreams. 

You make me look up at the stars. 
You make me find new paths…
You are a cold drink, 
to my parched journey.  
Now I no longer…
walk alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Theraven Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 12:41 PM
Ann, Very nice this poem 'Gentle On My Mind'. May you never walk alone. -Richard
Kiser Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 9:51 AM
What a wonderful piece, beautiful.
Foster Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 12:48 PM
Thank you friend. Ann
Wolf Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 8:16 PM
'...a cold drink to my parched journey,' --- Lovely line, Ann! Lovely poem! :) gw
Foster Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:53 AM
Your words mean a lot. Ty friend. I hope your days journey(s) are full of cool drinks, and nice times. God give you a wonderful holiday and a safe and Happy New Year! Ann
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