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Gentle Kisses

Loden rose petals Blush with the first fervent kiss, Of the warm Spring breeze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/11/2010 9:41:00 AM
Sweet and soft..lovely...Charma
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Date: 3/28/2010 2:13:00 PM
Its like an advert for an expensive perfume, just lovely >> James
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Date: 3/24/2010 2:02:00 PM
I can almost breathe in the fragrance with this lovely poem! :) Nice!!! mmmmm!
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Date: 3/24/2010 10:10:00 AM
OUtstanding..spring brings out the best in us I think..this is so lovely. Bg
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Date: 3/24/2010 10:04:00 AM
So soft and lovely Raul. What a beautiful write. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/24/2010 9:21:00 AM
Sweet image of spring, Raul. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/24/2010 8:41:00 AM
VERY NICE LOVED IT FALESHIA
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Date: 3/24/2010 6:33:00 AM
Very soft write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/24/2010 6:03:00 AM
enjoyed
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Date: 3/24/2010 5:03:00 AM
Sweet and lovely Haiku Raul.. a great visualization of mind capturing the moment.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/24/2010 3:08:00 AM
Very descriptive well done.
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Date: 3/24/2010 3:05:00 AM
This one made me smile Paul - Thanks for sharing -:)
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