Gentle Kisses

Loden rose petals
Blush with the first fervent kiss,
Of the warm Spring breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chircop Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 9:41 AM
Sweet and soft..lovely...Charma
Fraser Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 2:13 PM
Its like an advert for an expensive perfume, just lovely >> James
Richards Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 2:02 PM
I can almost breathe in the fragrance with this lovely poem! :) Nice!!! mmmmm!
Gorelick Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 10:10 AM
OUtstanding..spring brings out the best in us I think..this is so lovely. Bg
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 10:04 AM
So soft and lovely Raul. What a beautiful write. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Sweet image of spring, Raul. Love, Carolyn
Murphy Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 8:41 AM
VERY NICE LOVED IT FALESHIA
Kendrick Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 6:33 AM
Very soft write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 6:03 AM
enjoyed
Sweetheart Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 5:03 AM
Sweet and lovely Haiku Raul.. a great visualization of mind capturing the moment.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Nutter Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 3:08 AM
Very descriptive well done.
Bathsheba Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 3:05 AM
This one made me smile Paul - Thanks for sharing -:)
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