Gentle As the Moon

Who is this?
That calls me from my latent apathy.
Why is this good?
rescuing heart from lovers atrophy.

My desperate mewling 
reached further than a shout.
Stumbling toe scraping limp
took me further, packed more clout.

I was lied to.
Thinking that you're bottomless ration,
could be earned,
could be bought with acts of compassion.

I was indulging in hurt,
abiding in poetic romantic pain.
I was thrashing around
bellowing at nothing,
needing to blame.


Why is this love for me?
when I was wasting all my energy
on a treadmill run.
Who is this?
That holds me light;
gentle as the moon,
source of the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/21/2011 6:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Ross. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Ross Thompson
Date: 12/24/2011 4:19:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words. Have a lovely new Year :)
Date: 12/20/2011 2:54:00 PM
Beautiful poem Ross. OXOX Love Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/24/2011 4:19:00 AM
Thank you x
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