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Genie In a Bottle

Floating in the sea
                         a genie needs to be free
                          Three rubs and I'm fine

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 14, 2014 at 4:36 AM

great one Aiyah ...love ...rajat

Liam Mcdaid

September 25, 2014 at 4:19 PM

very beautifully painted picture

Matthew Anish

August 11, 2014 at 8:51 PM

Hope the genie grants your wishes! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jack Ellison

August 8, 2014 at 9:34 AM

What a sweet senryu by a sweet, sweet young filly! Big huggeroonies... Granddaddy Jack XOXOX

Nette Onclaud

August 5, 2014 at 11:37 AM

make that 4 wishes.. one for me, aiyah.. such a delightful 'ku.. huggs

Kira Price

August 4, 2014 at 6:48 PM

Hi you guys my first chapbook of Poetry is now available! I am really excited to be published and I will keep going and creating more work. Currently working on my next book which will be full length. Go check it out! https://www.createspace.com/4418272