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Home » Poems » Aiyah Torres » Genie In a Bottle

Genie In a Bottle

Floating in the sea a genie needs to be free Three rubs and I'm fine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/14/2014 4:36:00 AM
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great one Aiyah ...love ...rajat
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/25/2014 4:19:00 PM
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very beautifully painted picture
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Matthew Anish
Date: 8/11/2014 8:51:00 PM
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Hope the genie grants your wishes! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/8/2014 9:34:00 AM
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What a sweet senryu by a sweet, sweet young filly! Big huggeroonies... Granddaddy Jack XOXOX
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/5/2014 11:37:00 AM
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make that 4 wishes.. one for me, aiyah.. such a delightful 'ku.. huggs
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Kira Price
Date: 8/4/2014 6:48:00 PM
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Hi you guys my first chapbook of Poetry is now available! I am really excited to be published and I will keep going and creating more work. Currently working on my next book which will be full length. Go check it out! https://www.createspace.com/4418272
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/1/2014 3:33:00 PM
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- Rub 3 for me too :))) - Happy weekend dear friend, AiyaH !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 7/31/2014 11:34:00 AM
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This is nice. Send that genie to me. Thanks for your prayers... Lucilla
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/29/2014 5:55:00 PM
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this is just plain CUTE!! good luck in the contest but you should not need it!!
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Jim Tidd
Date: 7/24/2014 10:02:00 AM
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Very nice haiku. Now if I can just find the beach.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2014 5:41:00 PM
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Reads like a winner to me..If only we could run across that Genie..Thanks for the review of my work..Sara
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/21/2014 3:52:00 PM
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Very cute! Light & Love
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/19/2014 4:44:00 PM
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Lovely senryu, Aiyah! i'll give you a hand...let me get a duster:) // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/19/2014 1:57:00 AM
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Brilliant take Aiyah! gl in contest!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/18/2014 8:33:00 PM
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How original this is...good one for sure. BG
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 4:12:00 PM
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How wonderful...hugs Tim
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2014 3:55:00 PM
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Lovely write and I love the acapella version of Christina Aguileras song of the same name. Hugs Jan xxx
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