Geneva Has Evolved

"Fragments and crumbs of life, 
                                  all the little pieces" 

                                 John Ruskin 1853


        Having lived with our Mom in Sydney for six months
        Federal Police returned us to live with our father 
        He had begun working as the art teacher
        at a small Christian school in Tasmania


He and other staff members lived at the school.  
I was 8, my sister 6. Geneva was experimental then. 
Elementary students were taught together in one hall. 
Desks divided from next, talk was completely disallowed. 


An American curriculum called ACE was adhered to. 
As the art teacher's daughter, naturally I washed all the brushes. 
Three utterances compiled in class per day earned detention. 
Despite it being 1991, rulers whapped knuckles on occasion. 


         Cherished butterfly catching buddy, best friend, Penny
         Fed apples from ample pile to fence wire necked horses
         Dawn saluting dairy sold milk for locals, chapel on site 
         Peers lived a wall away, an idyllic community lifestyle 


Generally, three afternoons per week, my father took
My sister on playground, shopping outings. 
I stayed home. Instructed not to go outside. 
Staff's children grassy antics gazed at through glass. 
                                                 


I ate vitamin c tablets by the dozen, and scrapings of butter. 
A staff member bought all our groceries from a limited list.
I sang for company. There was no radio or TV. 
My Dad and sister returned at nightfall. Chewing on sweets. 


     Alone in the house, I imaged it was a cruising ocean vessel 
     I sailed down the dim driveway, swamped by giant pines
     I took apples, a cow, a Bible, pencils for sketching horses
     Sailing on jaunty sun hugged foliage, I was captain



'Geneva Has Evolved' 
Constance La France 
All The Little Pieces Contest 

25th August 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Theraven Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 2:49 PM
Sigrid, Like rummaging through a stranger's kitchen drawer looking for something lost, and not knowing what it was. I think I found it in this poem. -Richard
Spilchuk Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 11:49 AM
An interesting story of your childhood in Tasmania, and religious schooling and upbringing. Filled with imagery and history. Nicely done.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 3:53 PM
Hello sigrid, wow! I was reading wondering what will happen next. A very good imagination. enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 10:39 AM
Hello Sigrid Ermine, i hope all is well with you. You are welcome . Enjoy your day my friend.
Ermine Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Thank you dearly, Darlene.
Eslinger Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Significant, oh you have described the sad background of a youth unwanted and very predatory to engaging me along on your imaged ship off to better shores. I hurt for you. I joined in your escape. I like the almost prose-like sentences of your stanzas, truly, I think, providing pieces like a mosaic of your picture. Nice work
Ermine Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 3:57 PM
That means a lot to me, Sally. Thank you for coming in to read it. I am keen to read many more of your complex works.(poets with same initials should stick together) Welcome to Soup, may you always enjoy it here
Walker Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 6:08 AM
Beautifully written. Couragous. I am most affraid of my childhood
Ermine Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 4:07 PM
.. You must tell, David. Poems are such a freeing outlet.... This one for a contest, allowed me a reason, hadn't remotely considered describing this before...
La France Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 2:45 AM
Sigrid, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this wonderful write _Constance
Ermine Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 2:49 AM
Thank you, Constance. Very kind. Many marvellous entries.
Lawrence Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 8:48 AM
Sigrid, I love this .... it’s slow steady pace....your memory and vivid descriptions..... the time elapse .... the repression..... the loneliness..... the longing..... the fantasy ..... you at the helm . Thank you for sharing your inner world and your journey.
Ermine Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 8:57 PM
Ta, Susan. Enjoy your experience posting, writing here on PS.
Andresen Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 11:03 AM
- Back to congratulate, Sigrid ... this time for the contest "All The Little Pieces" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ermine Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 8:54 PM
Rest your hand, please, dear Anne--Lise.! Love
Kauffman Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on your top win, Sigrid. Your well told story just about ripped my heart out - heart wrenching. Thank you for sharing it.
Ermine Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 8:55 PM
Bless you, Sam. Thank you for your caring thought
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 5:03 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Sigrid! This piece is a great narrative that flows smoothly, enabling us to read at first read with ease.
Ermine Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 5:07 PM
Ta
One Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 10:52 AM
Congrats on POTD
Ermine Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 11:02 PM
Thanks, SO
Carmack Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 9:08 PM
Glad to see you get a POTD. I like your style and I glad to see others liking it too.
Ermine Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 4:02 AM
You're a dear, Rob. I'd have you to ten of them.
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 2:16 AM
an incredible story with such vivid detail, many congrats on POTD Sigrid:-) hugs Jan xx
Ermine Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 3:41 AM
Thank you, Jan. Good of you to stop in, I appreciate and value everyone's time.
Kauffman Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:40 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Sigrid. Spelndid and moving write!
Ermine Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 3:38 AM
Thank you, Sam. Dozens of more remarkable c writes pump into our soupy system each day.
Koplin Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Congratulations on potd! Great job Sigrid! Good luck on the contest
Nicole Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 5:03 PM
"I was captain" Oh my!! Yes, you were. Such a moving journey you have taken us on. "Geneva Has Evolved" Indeed it has. Congratulations Sigrid. on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Ermine Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 3:35 AM
Thanks so much, Brandy. I appreciate the time you've taken to stop in.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Congratulations on your potd win. What a story/poem. Enjoy your win and day............
Ermine Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 3:33 AM
Thank you kindly, Paula. Good of you to stop in.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 1:09 PM
Wondrous praise, Sigrid, for it pleasant my eyes to see you here, having won POTD, and be blessed to be placed on its honorific pedestal to be ingratiated by your fellow peers for your splendid achievement, I am very happy for you my dear friend, Aloha! William
Ermine Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 3:33 AM
You are bringing a massive smile, William. Bless your warm soul!
Watt Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 10:34 AM
Back to congratulate you on the POTD selection. Enjoy the honor today ~ John
Ermine Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 3:31 AM
Thanks, my love. O. M - How is it possible I lost my bet on Pareidolia? Looked at a few, they are excellent. It seriously had such an interesting range.
Koplin Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 8:58 AM
A very well written piece, congratulations on potd and good luck in the contest!
Ermine Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 3:25 AM
Ta, Mark. Congratulations on all your very recent wins. I will be reading the Win list more thoroughly in the morning.
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:40 AM
Sounds almost like the 19th century instead of the 20th century! Horrifyingly fascinating. Life is more surreal than art, as usual... Congrats on POTD, Sigrid. Keep the Faith, Gershon
Ermine Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Thank you, gorgeous Gershon. Ha, yes indeed! But fiction is more fun to write, and looks better on the page.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:42 AM
A truly captivating read, splendid piece Sigrid, congratulations on POTD! My best to you in the contest too. Have a fabulous day! xomo
Ermine Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 3:27 AM
Thanks, dear Pigeon. It's good to know.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 9:02 AM
...well, I have a very limited attention span, and meatier poems are difficult for me to get through; this one went down smooth.
Ermine Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:05 AM
Thank you for your time, Pigeon. It's truly none of those things, must be a random handle yank. Ta, and many warm hugs, Poet
Gondolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:30 AM
Thank you for sharing these reflections on your childhood, Sigrid, congrats on POTD and best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
Ermine Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:03 AM
Thank you. It's good of you to stop by, John.
Pandit Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 5:08 AM
BIG congrats on poem of the day, Sigrid--your words stem from the heart--a beautiful, sincere depiction.
Ermine Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 5:37 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I checked Geneva's website yesterday, - it's quadrupled!
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:26 AM
- A first class poem for this contest, Sigrid - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. and good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ermine Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Hugs, dear Anne-Lise. Thanks for your support.
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