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Geneva Has Evolved

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" John Ruskin 1853 Having lived with our Mom in Sydney for six months Federal Police returned us to live with our father He had begun working as the art teacher at a small Christian school in Tasmania He and other staff members lived at the school. I was 8, my sister 6. Geneva was experimental then. Elementary students were taught together in one hall. Desks divided from next, talk was completely disallowed. An American curriculum called ACE was adhered to. As the art teacher's daughter, naturally I washed all the brushes. Three utterances compiled in class per day earned detention. Despite it being 1991, rulers whapped knuckles on occasion. Cherished butterfly catching buddy, best friend, Penny Fed apples from ample pile to fence wire necked horses Dawn saluting dairy sold milk for locals, chapel on site Peers lived a wall away, an idyllic community lifestyle Generally, three afternoons per week, my father took My sister on playground, shopping outings. I stayed home. Instructed not to go outside. Staff's children grassy antics gazed at through glass. I ate vitamin c tablets by the dozen, and scrapings of butter. A staff member bought all our groceries from a limited list. I sang for company. There was no radio or TV. My Dad and sister returned at nightfall. Chewing on sweets. Alone in the house, I imaged it was a cruising ocean vessel I sailed down the dim driveway, swamped by giant pines I took apples, a cow, a Bible, pencils for sketching horses Sailing on jaunty sun hugged foliage, I was captain 'Geneva Has Evolved' Constance La France All The Little Pieces Contest 25th August 2020

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Date: 4/4/2021 2:49:00 PM
Sigrid, Like rummaging through a stranger's kitchen drawer looking for something lost, and not knowing what it was. I think I found it in this poem. -Richard
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Date: 2/9/2021 11:49:00 AM
An interesting story of your childhood in Tasmania, and religious schooling and upbringing. Filled with imagery and history. Nicely done.
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Date: 9/24/2020 3:53:00 PM
Hello sigrid, wow! I was reading wondering what will happen next. A very good imagination. enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/25/2020 10:39:00 AM
Hello Sigrid Ermine, i hope all is well with you. You are welcome . Enjoy your day my friend.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/25/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you dearly, Darlene.
Date: 9/21/2020 7:54:00 PM
Wow, Sigrid. I am amazed at this piece you have written. You really brought me along on this difficult childhood journey, with such vivid images. Sounds like you gave yourself respite in a creative childhood imagination!
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/22/2020 4:37:00 AM
It's so nice of you to report this.... Not so much a poem, but it got chosen, hence higher views. Thank you for your time, Carol.
Date: 9/19/2020 3:05:00 PM
Significant, oh you have described the sad background of a youth unwanted and very predatory to engaging me along on your imaged ship off to better shores. I hurt for you. I joined in your escape. I like the almost prose-like sentences of your stanzas, truly, I think, providing pieces like a mosaic of your picture. Nice work
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/19/2020 3:57:00 PM
That means a lot to me, Sally. Thank you for coming in to read it. I am keen to read many more of your complex works.(poets with same initials should stick together) Welcome to Soup, may you always enjoy it here
Date: 9/15/2020 6:08:00 AM
Beautifully written. Couragous. I am most affraid of my childhood
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/16/2020 4:07:00 PM
.. You must tell, David. Poems are such a freeing outlet.... This one for a contest, allowed me a reason, hadn't remotely considered describing this before...
Date: 9/10/2020 2:45:00 AM
Sigrid, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this wonderful write _Constance
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/10/2020 2:49:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. Very kind. Many marvellous entries.
Date: 9/6/2020 8:48:00 AM
Sigrid, I love this .... it’s slow steady pace....your memory and vivid descriptions..... the time elapse .... the repression..... the loneliness..... the longing..... the fantasy ..... you at the helm . Thank you for sharing your inner world and your journey.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/6/2020 8:57:00 PM
Ta, Susan. Enjoy your experience posting, writing here on PS.
Date: 9/4/2020 11:03:00 AM
- Back to congratulate, Sigrid ... this time for the contest "All The Little Pieces" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/6/2020 8:54:00 PM
Rest your hand, please, dear Anne--Lise.! Love
Date: 9/4/2020 9:00:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on your top win, Sigrid. Your well told story just about ripped my heart out - heart wrenching. Thank you for sharing it.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/6/2020 8:55:00 PM
Bless you, Sam. Thank you for your caring thought
Date: 9/3/2020 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Sigrid! This piece is a great narrative that flows smoothly, enabling us to read at first read with ease.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/3/2020 5:07:00 PM
Ta
Date: 8/30/2020 10:52:00 AM
Congrats on POTD
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/30/2020 11:02:00 PM
Thanks, SO
Date: 8/29/2020 9:08:00 PM
Glad to see you get a POTD. I like your style and I glad to see others liking it too.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/30/2020 4:02:00 AM
You're a dear, Rob. I'd have you to ten of them.
Date: 8/28/2020 2:16:00 AM
an incredible story with such vivid detail, many congrats on POTD Sigrid:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/28/2020 3:41:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. Good of you to stop in, I appreciate and value everyone's time.
Date: 8/27/2020 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Sigrid. Spelndid and moving write!
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/28/2020 3:38:00 AM
Thank you, Sam. Dozens of more remarkable c writes pump into our soupy system each day.
Date: 8/27/2020 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations on potd! Great job Sigrid! Good luck on the contest
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Date: 8/27/2020 5:03:00 PM
"I was captain" Oh my!! Yes, you were. Such a moving journey you have taken us on. "Geneva Has Evolved" Indeed it has. Congratulations Sigrid. on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/28/2020 3:35:00 AM
Thanks so much, Brandy. I appreciate the time you've taken to stop in.
Date: 8/27/2020 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your potd win. What a story/poem. Enjoy your win and day............
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/28/2020 3:33:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Paula. Good of you to stop in.
Date: 8/27/2020 1:09:00 PM
Wondrous praise, Sigrid, for it pleasant my eyes to see you here, having won POTD, and be blessed to be placed on its honorific pedestal to be ingratiated by your fellow peers for your splendid achievement, I am very happy for you my dear friend, Aloha! William
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/28/2020 3:33:00 AM
You are bringing a massive smile, William. Bless your warm soul!
Date: 8/27/2020 10:34:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on the POTD selection. Enjoy the honor today ~ John
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/28/2020 3:31:00 AM
Thanks, my love. O. M - How is it possible I lost my bet on Pareidolia? Looked at a few, they are excellent. It seriously had such an interesting range.
Date: 8/27/2020 8:58:00 AM
A very well written piece, congratulations on potd and good luck in the contest!
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/28/2020 3:25:00 AM
Ta, Mark. Congratulations on all your very recent wins. I will be reading the Win list more thoroughly in the morning.
Date: 8/27/2020 7:40:00 AM
Sounds almost like the 19th century instead of the 20th century! Horrifyingly fascinating. Life is more surreal than art, as usual... Congrats on POTD, Sigrid. Keep the Faith, Gershon
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/27/2020 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, gorgeous Gershon. Ha, yes indeed! But fiction is more fun to write, and looks better on the page.
Date: 8/27/2020 6:42:00 AM
A truly captivating read, splendid piece Sigrid, congratulations on POTD! My best to you in the contest too. Have a fabulous day! xomo
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/28/2020 3:27:00 AM
Thanks, dear Pigeon. It's good to know.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/27/2020 9:02:00 AM
...well, I have a very limited attention span, and meatier poems are difficult for me to get through; this one went down smooth.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/27/2020 7:05:00 AM
Thank you for your time, Pigeon. It's truly none of those things, must be a random handle yank. Ta, and many warm hugs, Poet
Date: 8/27/2020 6:30:00 AM
Thank you for sharing these reflections on your childhood, Sigrid, congrats on POTD and best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/27/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thank you. It's good of you to stop by, John.
Date: 8/27/2020 5:08:00 AM
BIG congrats on poem of the day, Sigrid--your words stem from the heart--a beautiful, sincere depiction.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/27/2020 5:37:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I checked Geneva's website yesterday, - it's quadrupled!
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