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Genesis

When the land was smooth, life brand-new In Eden, there lived one, then two Since the Earth's dawn, man walked as youth Life brand-new, when the land was smooth In the garden were two sweet blooms Under the care of watchful grooms Viscous phrases made ears harden Two sweet blooms were in the garden Between grapevines, our foe hid Still in great ruling halls amid Presents his wrath like mocking wines Our foe hid between grapevines Broken cisterns marking his path Like mocking wines presents his wrath The cast of youth weakly discerns Marking his path, broken cisterns

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Date: 7/13/2025 10:09:00 AM
Love it Trina. Broken cisterns indeed, stil existing in our time on massive scale
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/13/2025 11:57:00 AM
Facts, Tom! I hope you are having an awesome day. Blessings.

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