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Generous Nature

bees stockpile pollen then they return to their hives while I eat breakfast: sweet honey was spread on toast. meager reward for their work bees humming loudly swarms in a delightful way, my humble garden as the sun comes up the sky to drink nectar of flowers the world of nature supplies for all our entails what we use include sufficient assets to share if we were fair and balanced
Written: November 29, 2022 A Brian Strand Choice Hiku Footle Tanka Clerihew Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 12/1/2022 4:37:00 PM
Love your tribute to industrious bees, and the moral in the final verse. Beautiful imagery!
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Date: 11/30/2022 11:29:00 AM
Nice tribute to bees, my friend! We surely need them to stay alive!
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Date: 11/30/2022 9:55:00 AM
Bees are God's hard-working laborers that never complain and remain humble, Humans have a lot to learn. Absolutely marvelous writing, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!
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Date: 11/30/2022 9:50:00 AM
I appreciate last stanza most. Have Good Days.
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Date: 11/30/2022 6:01:00 AM
Your ending line has a great message my friend. We have to respect nature as we enjoy its gifts.
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Date: 11/30/2022 5:42:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/30/2022 2:33:00 AM
- Nature can give us everything we need... people have forgotten how... sad - A lovely poem, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 11/29/2022 7:09:00 PM
Definitely Nature will provide us with everything needed, if we treat her fair. This tanka on the honey bees is capturing in content and in its message. All the best dear Lasaad.
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