Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Generosity of Fall

whorl
of gig,
seasonal
festivity ~
shapely, forested feast,
fairyland of colors.

scarlet, gold, and pumpkin,
reddish-purple notes ~
serenade of
surging gale’s
lavish
spend


9/7/2021
Sponsor: Malabika Choudhury
MERSE - Beauty Of Fall
PS syllable counter used

gig - job usually for specified time

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Susan Ashley October 24, 2021 at 8:23 PM Dear Kim, your wonderful pen has captured my favorite season with verve! Beautiful imagery uniquely expressed. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2021 at 8:05 AM Thank you, Susan!

Eve Roper September 26, 2021 at 11:07 AM Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Kim , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve Kim Rodrigues September 26, 2021 at 3:51 PM Thank you, Eve!

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 26, 2021 at 6:16 AM Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala Kim Rodrigues September 26, 2021 at 6:34 AM Thank you, Mala!

Caren Krutsinger September 10, 2021 at 6:18 AM I started to highlight my favorite parts, but then I realized they are ALL my favorite parts, so I popped it onto my FAVE list Kim. Kim Rodrigues September 10, 2021 at 9:39 AM Thank you so much, Caren!

Victor Buhagiar September 8, 2021 at 1:16 AM Very well constructed, Kim. Best for a win. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues September 10, 2021 at 9:51 AM Thank you, Victor! Hugs

Sam Kauffman September 7, 2021 at 3:43 PM Oh I can feel the crisp wind on my face Kim and see the swirling leaves. Love the energy in your words! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for you! Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2021 at 4:57 PM Thank you so much! Blessings!

Sotto Poet September 7, 2021 at 2:00 PM This is so lovely; it should be a winner. I wish you good luck, Kim. Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2021 at 4:57 PM Thank you so much!

Tom Cunningham September 7, 2021 at 1:02 PM We're heading for it now and you're right, she provides beauty to our landscape. Good luck in the contest Tom Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2021 at 1:23 PM Thank you, dear Tom!

Regina Mcintosh September 7, 2021 at 11:56 AM Beautiful. My favorite season. Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2021 at 12:21 PM My favorite too! Blessings and love ~ Kim

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 7, 2021 at 11:00 AM This is so lovely, Kim. I think I see a winner. Blessings, Evelyn :) Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2021 at 12:21 PM Thank you! :) Blessings!