Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Rhyme

Gems of Rarity

Endearing words of mine piling in confusion
A soul dropping ink hither and thither in profusion
The muse of beauty denies my pen the spell
Gems of rarity out glow and strive against the shell
Voice of poetry, echo of my life
Compose your note and mind strife
Euterpe, Muse of music delight me bestow
Words of soul, inhale harmony and through flute flow
Amazed, my heart pounding on ebony and ivory
Enchanted, I take a bow in ecstasy.

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M. L. Kiser September 4, 2018 at 7:31 PM Well done! I especially enjoyed the imagery in these lines. "A soul dropping ink hither and thither in profusion The muse of beauty denies my pen the spell" "Euterpe, Muse of music delight me bestow Words of soul, inhale harmony and through flute flow Amazed, my heart pounding on ebony and ivory" Besma Riabi Dziri September 5, 2018 at 1:49 PM It is with immense pleasure that I read your exhaustive and praising feedback M.L. Kiser. I would like to thank you for your generous and kind words for my humble write. A visit I do appreciate and value. Stay blessed always.

Susan Ashley April 29, 2018 at 12:17 PM Dear Besma, I'm in ecstasy after reading your beautifully rhythmic poetic lines of lovely rhymes and gorgeous emotional imagery.. 'Euterpe, Muse of music delight me bestow Words of soul, inhale harmony and through flute flow' - absolutely breathtaking! Warmest wishes, my friend.. Besma Riabi Dziri April 29, 2018 at 12:23 PM Dear Susan I can feel the genuine beauty of your soul reading your heartfelt words! A soul of abundance you are! So elated by your valuable feedback! My pleasure dear Susan, stay glowing with beauty!

Vijay Pandit April 20, 2018 at 7:09 AM Intriguing poem..I see the transformation from..piling in confusion..to..amazement and enchantment. Well written, Besma. Besma Riabi Dziri April 20, 2018 at 7:29 AM Thank you Vijay Pandit for bestowing me the honour and time to read and insightfully appreciate my poem.

Sunlite Wanter April 19, 2018 at 6:26 PM Reads like listening to music. Besma Riabi Dziri April 20, 2018 at 1:41 AM I'm glad you enjoyed the music! Thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating my write!

Line Gauthier April 19, 2018 at 5:52 PM A beautiful poem, Besma. I love the way you suggested a comparison to the piano. Besma Riabi Dziri April 19, 2018 at 5:57 PM Thank you so much dear Line for your generous and appreciative feedback! I'm deeply honoured by your uplifting visit! My pleasure, stay safe dear!