Daniel Turner Poet Rhyme

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Gems of Love

Bright stars shine in night skies
Like bangles, baubles and beads
Puts a twinkle in every girl's eyes
Like a gift of fine jewelry

A pair of sun stone earrings
Presented to the daughter I love
Some expensive fatherly bling
The price for her, one hug

Red copper reflecting inclusions
Dark middles fade to light edges
An adventurine feldspar illusion
Perfect for eternal love pledges

Turquoise blue or teal green schiller
Either one is an eye to heart thriller


    October 21 2016
 ladies ring size 7 1/2  color: teal green

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Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2016 at 4:04 PM heehee!! silly me (I can't seem to find a poem to comment to and I'm running late. Let me know if there are recent ones I have missed, will you?)

Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2016 at 11:47 PM This is wonderful, DANNY!!! I love it. And hey, your girl has my ring size!! Daniel Turner October 25, 2016 at 8:39 AM Thank you, Andrea. You're so silly:)

Supraja Kannan October 24, 2016 at 7:52 AM Oh A big 7..This is so lovely....Beautifully written....Good luck with the contest.... Daniel Turner October 25, 2016 at 8:37 AM Thank you Supraja:)

Eve Roper October 23, 2016 at 7:37 PM If it's a daughter, son , or grandchild you want to spoil that is just the love that is inside the person that is giving.... Hug Eve Daniel Turner October 23, 2016 at 8:19 PM Thank you, Mrs Eve. Yes, I guess I did spoil them a little but they still turned out better than I did. i appreciate your kind comments:)

Mike Hauser October 23, 2016 at 6:27 PM Beautiful! Daniel Turner October 23, 2016 at 8:18 PM Thanks, Mike. I appreciate it.

Nette Onclaud October 23, 2016 at 4:18 PM a gem for life, daniel.. you shine with sentimentality!..huggs Daniel Turner October 23, 2016 at 4:40 PM Thank you, nette. I do love my children:) I appreciate your kind comments.

Phillip Garcia October 23, 2016 at 8:52 AM :) you ol' sap you. Beautiful as only you can pen beauty. Well done DT Daniel Turner October 23, 2016 at 4:39 PM Thank you, Phillip. I sure got you buffaloed. Lol

Carol B. October 22, 2016 at 11:20 PM Love the poem and the sentiment in this piece. Lucky girl to have such a loving father. Beautiful as always :) A fav. Daniel Turner October 23, 2016 at 4:26 PM Thank you, Carol. I really appreciate your kind comments:)

Freddie Robinson Jr. October 22, 2016 at 12:19 PM I don't know much about jewelry, Daniel, but this poem sparked my interest in learning about them. Very nice poem. Love and peace. Daniel Turner October 23, 2016 at 4:25 PM Thank you, Freddie. I appreciate your kind comments. i didn't know a lot either until I had a daughter. Daddies have to learn those sorts of things:)

Keith Logan October 22, 2016 at 7:39 AM Things can balance out in time. My daughter-in-law is like to me, that daughter I never had. Daniel Turner October 22, 2016 at 8:44 AM Thank you, Keith. I understand completely. I'm sure she's a wonderful young lady. I appreciate your kind comments.

Paloma P October 22, 2016 at 5:52 AM This is definitely a gem, Like a huge hug within your poetry. Warm and embracing. A jewel, proud papa. So fine. :) Paloma P October 22, 2016 at 10:28 AM Kids are meant to be spoiled, it's the price we pay for fooling around. :) Daniel Turner October 22, 2016 at 8:43 AM Thank you, Paloma. Yes my children, although spoiled, are a source of pride for me. They are my greatest accomplishment. I appreciate your kind comments.

Jan Allison October 22, 2016 at 4:02 AM Oh so touching Daniel - I love the line about the price, one hug. I am sure she treasures this lovely gift:-) hugs Jan xx Daniel Turner October 22, 2016 at 8:41 AM Thank you, Jan. Yes, I know for a fact she wears them quite a bit. I appreciate your kind comments. How are your eyes? You feeling OK? Did you get your hearing aid? Hoping all is well with you.

Probir Gupta October 22, 2016 at 1:46 AM So nice, touching and lovely ... itself a gem ... Daniel Turner October 22, 2016 at 8:39 AM Thank you, Probir. You are very kind.

Alexis Y. October 22, 2016 at 12:17 AM Aww, Daniel this is such a heartfelt write. There's nothing like a father's love. It's something us girls hold deep in our hearts. It is evident how much you love your daughter in this piece. Yes she adores the jewelry but it doesn't come close to the one that "gave " them to her. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A undeniable SEVEN: -) Alexis Daniel Turner October 22, 2016 at 8:39 AM Thank you, Alexis. Yes, there is something special about that father daughter bond. I appreciate your kind comments and high marks:)