Gems of Love

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Bright stars shine in night skies
Like bangles, baubles and beads
Puts a twinkle in every girl's eyes
Like a gift of fine jewelry

A pair of sun stone earrings
Presented to the daughter I love
Some expensive fatherly bling
The price for her, one hug

Red copper reflecting inclusions
Dark middles fade to light edges
An adventurine feldspar illusion
Perfect for eternal love pledges

Turquoise blue or teal green schiller
Either one is an eye to heart thriller


    October 21 2016
 ladies ring size 7 1/2  color: teal green

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/25/2016 4:04:00 PM
heehee!! silly me (I can't seem to find a poem to comment to and I'm running late. Let me know if there are recent ones I have missed, will you?)
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Date: 10/24/2016 11:47:00 PM
This is wonderful, DANNY!!! I love it. And hey, your girl has my ring size!!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/25/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. You're so silly:)
Date: 10/24/2016 7:52:00 AM
Oh A big 7..This is so lovely....Beautifully written....Good luck with the contest....
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Date: 10/25/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thank you Supraja:)
Date: 10/23/2016 7:37:00 PM
If it's a daughter, son , or grandchild you want to spoil that is just the love that is inside the person that is giving.... Hug Eve
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 8:19:00 PM
Thank you, Mrs Eve. Yes, I guess I did spoil them a little but they still turned out better than I did. i appreciate your kind comments:)
Date: 10/23/2016 6:27:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 8:18:00 PM
Thanks, Mike. I appreciate it.
Date: 10/23/2016 4:18:00 PM
a gem for life, daniel.. you shine with sentimentality!..huggs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, nette. I do love my children:) I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 10/23/2016 8:52:00 AM
:) you ol' sap you. Beautiful as only you can pen beauty. Well done DT
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Phillip. I sure got you buffaloed. Lol
Date: 10/22/2016 11:20:00 PM
Love the poem and the sentiment in this piece. Lucky girl to have such a loving father. Beautiful as always :) A fav.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 4:26:00 PM
Thank you, Carol. I really appreciate your kind comments:)
Date: 10/22/2016 12:19:00 PM
I don't know much about jewelry, Daniel, but this poem sparked my interest in learning about them. Very nice poem. Love and peace.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/23/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Freddie. I appreciate your kind comments. i didn't know a lot either until I had a daughter. Daddies have to learn those sorts of things:)
Date: 10/22/2016 7:39:00 AM
Things can balance out in time. My daughter-in-law is like to me, that daughter I never had.
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Date: 10/22/2016 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, Keith. I understand completely. I'm sure she's a wonderful young lady. I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 10/22/2016 5:52:00 AM
This is definitely a gem, Like a huge hug within your poetry. Warm and embracing. A jewel, proud papa. So fine. :)
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Paloma P
Date: 10/22/2016 10:28:00 AM
Kids are meant to be spoiled, it's the price we pay for fooling around. :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/22/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thank you, Paloma. Yes my children, although spoiled, are a source of pride for me. They are my greatest accomplishment. I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 10/22/2016 4:02:00 AM
Oh so touching Daniel - I love the line about the price, one hug. I am sure she treasures this lovely gift:-) hugs Jan xx
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Daniel Turner
Date: 10/22/2016 8:41:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. Yes, I know for a fact she wears them quite a bit. I appreciate your kind comments. How are your eyes? You feeling OK? Did you get your hearing aid? Hoping all is well with you.
Date: 10/22/2016 1:46:00 AM
So nice, touching and lovely ... itself a gem ...
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Date: 10/22/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, Probir. You are very kind.
Date: 10/22/2016 12:17:00 AM
Aww, Daniel this is such a heartfelt write. There's nothing like a father's love. It's something us girls hold deep in our hearts. It is evident how much you love your daughter in this piece. Yes she adores the jewelry but it doesn't come close to the one that "gave " them to her. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A undeniable SEVEN: -) Alexis
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Date: 10/22/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis. Yes, there is something special about that father daughter bond. I appreciate your kind comments and high marks:)
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