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“birds care not for whom they sing” - Silent One


                                          I
                                       Know
                                     It  is  so
                                  that the stars
                                Don't shine all day
                              They wait till night fall
                            And they  hear my  lonely
                         Heart call and decide to twinkle
                      A  happy  birthday from me  to  you
                   A flower blooms for a  passer by or for us
                 The ones that water it and nurture and care
               My heart,  truly feels the quote should really be
            Birds care not whom listens to them sing, maybe so.
           It might be they sing to the mate and chicks they love.
       They  may even be singing  thanks  the glorious one above
     Does a loving mother care who hears when she sings her lullaby?
Does the moon care for whom it shines? are its beams directed correctly?
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Date: 7/3/2024 2:17:00 PM
Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 7/2/2024 9:43:00 PM
Beautiful gesture , birthday wish from your poetic heart, i love the last two lines , and how youv also presented this. It looks like an umbrella, as i use my phone for soup, its hard to see exact shape but you do shape poems very well dear sv. Thank you for joining and also for the wish, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/2/2024 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun/cute/great Shape write for Silent One. Great/pretty bird picture. Great/creative job with this one...  Have a great day writing away...............
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Date: 7/2/2024 8:26:00 AM
Wow, so creative , my friend. This is so cute
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