Gemini ( Male.)

All my friends say they can not abide
these two people I have deep inside
Let the first one insist,
feel the other resist
while I wait for their war to subside.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 12:50 PM
Many congratulations Gerard on your win in pd's contest with this kool Limerick >> James
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations on your win Gerard in P. D.'S contest "Zodiac Race" Love,Carol
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September 26, 2010 at 7:27 PM
GERARD, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN A JoB WELL DoNE, ENJoYED YoUR ENTRY 4 P.D's ZoDIAC CoNTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
Roberts Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 9:56 AM
good one, congrats on your win in the contest
Mehta Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:05 AM
Congratulations on thyis fine win in the contest, Gerard
K. Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 4:24 AM
oh the tug of war of the twins indeed!! This was a fun limerick-- congrats on your win, Gerard :)-- nikko :)
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September 26, 2010 at 1:45 AM
GERARD, Congratulations!! Thanks for a job well done, enjoyed your entry. Had fun reading,,lol,, I could have skipped the judging part, well some one had to. Glad you where among my winners,..p.d.
Neels Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 11:53 PM
Congrats Gerard, hope the twins don't get into a fight about who actually won the contest ;) enjoy your weekend! wilma
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 11:21 PM
Congratulations, Gerard, you twinsy guy!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 10:37 PM
Congrats Gerard on your win in P.D.'s contest with this awesome piece on the Gemini Male..the only thing to offset him is the Gemini female..ME..haha.. enjoyed your write luv.. enjoy your sweet success on this happy Sunday with luv..
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September 20, 2010 at 7:37 AM
I've known a few Geminis, and agree, the twins are opposites indeed. However, as far as I know, you are doing just fine. Enjoyed this Limerick, Gerard. Peace, Audrey
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August 27, 2010 at 2:41 PM
Interesting facts about Gemini..Good luck if entry into the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Also, for the encouraging words for our son...Thanks for pointing out my mistake in my poem ...I will have to look at it again and see what I did..Sara
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August 27, 2010 at 2:01 PM
Very clever, Gerard. My sister is a Gemini and I swear she has two people fighting within for control. She goes from sweet and loving to critical and harsh quite quickly. I've never seen the dark side of you, my friend. A great entry for the astrology contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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August 26, 2010 at 10:30 PM
Very good one about GEmini, Gerard and thanks so much for commenting on my blog.OUv, Andrea
D. Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 9:45 PM
well donr for the zodiac contest, nice Limerick"
Goff Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 11:22 AM
yea, me too....can be both a curse and a blessing! jimbo
Neels Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 3:09 AM
Perfectly describe Gerard, this made me think of all the my Gemini friends, know I understand them better :)
Mehta Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 6:47 PM
A nice write opn Gemini, Gerard
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August 25, 2010 at 6:18 PM
Perfect, Gerard! Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
Richards Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 5:34 PM
I am a fellow Gemini !! Perhaps that rumbling in my stomach isn't hungar pangs....it's a war going on between those two me's !! :)
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