Lin Lane Poet Sedoka

Gelid Winter Winds-Ws

Gelid winter winds
are creating drifts of snow
The perfect time for sledding

Trying to keep warm
I bundled up in woolens
And... played for hours in the cold



January 13, 2023
Winter Sedoka Contest
Sponsored by Charlie Messina

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Sara Kendrick January 26, 2023 at 6:28 AM I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2023 at 1:28 PM this is sure cute. Congrats on your win.

Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 9:16 AM Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Now we are cold so inside for hot chocolate. Have a great day..............

Charles Messina January 25, 2023 at 4:58 AM Lovely write, Lin. Reminds me of my younger years :) Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Hugs Charlie

Mike Gentile January 13, 2023 at 6:32 AM Lin, your seasonal Sedoka though chilly in imagery brought warmth to my heart!! I really enjoyed! Happy Friday xxoo Lin Lane January 13, 2023 at 6:52 AM Thank you very much, Mike. I'm so pleased you could envision the snowy day.

Tom Cunningham January 13, 2023 at 6:20 AM Took me back when I used to take my daughters to the park sledding, after a couple of hours when our hands had turned blue it was time to go home. Tom Lin Lane January 13, 2023 at 6:51 AM I've never had the opportunity to go sledding until I was too old and at risk of breaking bones. ha Thanks, Tom.