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August- 18- 2025

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Geese with Moon on their Wings

geese fly in crystal blue skies. 
they move in V shape,
soaring and gliding through air
along the moonscape.
with wind under wings,
they seem lunar rays in flight.
their loud honking rings.

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John Fleming

August 22, 2025 at 3:53 PM

Title drew me in...found the poem both charming and, somewhat strangely, soothing also. It really is very appealing, Valsa. Enjoyed! :) john

Kim Rodrigues

August 19, 2025 at 7:30 AM

Nice! I found that particular wording challenging. Love that last line!

Sotto Poet

August 19, 2025 at 2:04 AM

A beautiful metaphor is used in your poetry. The rhyme glided gracefully, hardly audible above a whisper. Writers who see holistically like you captured their wonderful sound. The images of the spirit soaring through the air are really genuine. Best of luck in the contest, dear Valsa.

sara Etgen-Baker

August 18, 2025 at 5:50 PM

lovely and captivating imagery in your poem, dear Valsa. Also the rhyme just flowed, non obtrusive. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

August 18, 2025 at 2:37 PM

I think this is a wonderful write to read. Great Picture... Love how they move in V shape. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a wonderful day writing away.......

Joseph P. DiMino

August 18, 2025 at 11:29 AM

Love their poetic honking, immortalized by those writers who hear tunefully, visually as you. Great imagery, with flying sense of freedom and light!

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