Geese with Moon on their Wings

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August- 18- 2025

Favorite Things Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Nette Onclaud

geese fly in crystal blue skies. 
they move in V shape,
soaring and gliding through air
along the moonscape.
with wind under wings,
they seem lunar rays in flight.
their loud honking rings.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/18/2025 5:50:00 PM

lovely and captivating imagery in your poem, dear Valsa. Also the rhyme just flowed, non obtrusive. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2025 2:37:00 PM

I think this is a wonderful write to read. Great Picture... Love how they move in V shape. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a wonderful day writing away.......

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/18/2025 11:29:00 AM

Love their poetic honking, immortalized by those writers who hear tunefully, visually as you. Great imagery, with flying sense of freedom and light!