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Gee Whizz Lady

When I let one loose in the elevator,
I tried holding, but the gas had been greater.
Spreading in age, I couldn’t blame for later,
Every step I took, my body a traitor.

Three young man that were next to me,
Were trying to be respectful. One fell to his knees
Pinched his nose; Gee Whizz, Lady! Snickered tee-hee.
The doors flew opened, they buzzed out like bees.

8/1/2021


When I Let One Loose In The Elevator Poetry Contest
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Indiana Shaw August 9, 2021 at 9:05 PM My granny always took lavender tablets, so, hers always smelled sweet, loved your poem on the subject, ha, ha, ha . . . ; )

Caren Krutsinger August 7, 2021 at 5:32 PM Such humor in this one. I love it that you let three young men show you how bad it was!

Joanna Daniel August 4, 2021 at 1:58 AM Ha ha, had quite a laugh, Eve:)

Jan Allison August 3, 2021 at 5:10 PM ha ha ha this is hilariarse and I love pic pic Eve, thanks for the giggle:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2021 at 2:40 PM hahaha these are all so good. Gotta try it fast. you nailed it.

Scott Thirtyseven August 1, 2021 at 5:36 PM Fortunately for me my olfactory senses were not harmed during this read. So I was left with a big beaming smile on my face. Eve Roper August 1, 2021 at 9:43 PM Thank you, Scott, for visiting my verse and not getting offended. It is just helllll getting old.

Jennifer Proxenos August 1, 2021 at 11:34 AM Hi Eve, what a give away our age is, it is evident by what others hear and smell - sorry - however, i'm sure we have all had a similar experience. Well penned my friend, Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Eve Roper August 1, 2021 at 9:44 PM Thank you for your lovely visit my friend always a joy to hear from you. I hope you are doing well. Hugs Eve

Joseph P. DiMino August 1, 2021 at 8:59 AM My complaint with elevators also -- too many people, and not enough ventilation.... I think you and the young men should see a lawyer together (a case against the manufacturer)...or separately, depending on the time of day, and what everyone has eaten. Excellent, fun read. Eve Roper August 1, 2021 at 9:50 PM Thank you, Joe, for your visit. Yes, places like that should have good ventilation to help control, besides odor absorbing deodorizers. I am glad you liked the read.

Victor Buhagiar August 1, 2021 at 7:31 AM Lovely poem despite the smell. Hugs. Eve Roper August 1, 2021 at 10:04 PM Thank you, Victor. Hugs Eve

John Lawless August 1, 2021 at 5:03 AM a whiff and POOF.... Eve Roper August 1, 2021 at 10:05 PM a stinky one :)

Alexis Y. August 1, 2021 at 1:52 AM Lol! Eve, This is a good entry for the contest. Good picture too. Best wishes for the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexis