Ralph Sergi Poet Rhyme

Gee Whiz

Gee Whiz
I ate a sandwich made of wurst
with four large beers to quench my thirst
because my clothing was of worsted
I was extremely hot and really thirsted
I drank some more and nearly bursted
I  ran to the john to relieve my pain
I had to wait for I wasn't firsted
when it was free I  hurriedly ran
the whiz came out like heavy rain
after relief I repeated the act
and then went home for another snack

©Ralph Sergi Contest

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Debbie Guzzi February 1, 2015 at 4:53 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Ralph Sergi February 1, 2015 at 7:28 PM Thanks , Debbi, I love your poetry.

Skat A February 1, 2015 at 4:06 PM RALPH, Awesome WIN.... CONGRATS luv ~ SKAT ~

Jan Allison February 1, 2015 at 9:59 AM Dropping back with my congrats Ralph:-) Hugs Jan xx Ralph Sergi February 1, 2015 at 2:23 PM Hi Jan: Thanks again!

Poet Destroyer A February 1, 2015 at 9:49 AM Hello Ralph, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :) Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Own your Beauty" if you'd like or have time. Have yourself a wonderful day. Love LINDA

Liam Mcdaid October 5, 2014 at 9:54 PM smiling beautifully penned piece ralph Ralph Sergi October 6, 2014 at 9:44 AM Hi Liam, nice to know you: Thanks for commenting . I look forward to reading your poems.

Barbara Gorelick September 23, 2014 at 3:56 PM Oh, this is so funny Your thirsted, worsted-bursted rhyme is so good. BG Ralph Sergi September 23, 2014 at 5:58 PM Hi Barbara: Good to hear from you again. Thanks for the comment

Jan Allison September 23, 2014 at 2:14 PM LOL great humour here Ralph:-) hugs Jan xxx Ralph Sergi September 23, 2014 at 5:59 PM Hi Jan: Thank s for the comment.An Italian hug here.