Gazing Up

A sentinel
Celestial pearl 
Hung in silence 
Over the velvet
Of a midnight sky
A solitaire
Free spirit
Lunar splendor



AP: Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gilmour Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 2:23 AM
Many congrats on your top win Line, such glorious imagery - beautiful! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Thank you so much, Ann. Most appreciated.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 12:53 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win. Beautiful and crisp.
Gauthier Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Most appreciated.
Kiser Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 12:43 AM
"Fav"! That moon lasso's me every time.
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Scars Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 7:31 AM
so much said in such few words, I love where you took this theme. Good luck! :)-luloo
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 8:56 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Lu Loo.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 9:48 PM
She is a solitaire; I wanted that word but I did not think of it. It is perfect, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 10:33 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Caren.
Wanter Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 7:16 PM
What a beautiful image. I love looking at the sky when I take out my dog.
Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 8:35 PM
That is wonderful, Sunlite. You are making envious... it would be great to have a pet to walk.
Sands Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 6:39 PM
Very nice Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 8:35 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.
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