Gaze

Waves wash over me   high tide a rushing red   each pull pulsating   and ever present   hitched to a clevis moon   drawn to the gnaw of your wag   my footsteps traverse your trails   echoing a vibrant vibrato and tasting your luscious yields     I can't get back from here   like I ever wanted to     sand slips through my offerings   still here I gaze the night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Devonshire Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Your moonlit walk on the beach sounds so beautiful, Tim. It reflects the creative ways you appreciate nature. Very nice! Hugs, Carolyn
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 5:13 PM
Lovely
Nicole Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Breathtaking!! Your thoughts hold me in this moment. So beautifully expressed. ~ Brandy
Vaso Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:43 PM
I am gazing at your wonderful poem! This seems like a lovely dream!
Faulkner Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 3:36 PM
Sounds like a mystical night, so alluring!
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:51 PM
I'm gazing at your wonderful words wishing I could write something so beautiful!hugs jan xx
Green Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:48 PM
Beautifully rendered my friend. Sounds like my kind of beach
Krutsinger Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:46 PM
I am picturing you on that beach, enjoying the tides, the moon, the waves, and the night. Terrific imagery, Tim.
Papyrus Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Luscious yields... Couldn't have said it better. This is living!!
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