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Gathering Stardust

In my plan to traverse among wondrous astral vistas there is only one blemish that could create a calamity to endanger my exploration; my voyaging enterprise. My fate awaits, for the celestial stars have a protector... A sentry, luminescent at night, veiled by light of day. A lovely lady whose glowing face is a visage to behold. To you, supernal ruler of heavenly skies and sea tides, I offer this plea. Do not banish me from your domain, but if you offer this gift, I will be humbled and grateful, remembering that I once flew across the galaxy with you. Please be kind, haloed moon, do not dampen my hopes with pernicious thoughts that I would ever harm the stars. You guard the stellar bodies, and I mean them no harm for they supply the stardust that nurtures my dreams. Shine your silver glimmers along the path I should take. I will gather their falling glitter and then be on my way. 10/23/20 ~ Eight Word Challenge 11 Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton Words appearing in order: traverse, astral, blemish, enterprise, sentry, visage, dampen, and pernicious

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Date: 11/14/2020 9:42:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful, and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/29/2020 5:32:00 AM
Thank you very much, Beata.
Date: 11/13/2020 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations! on your top placement.Its a poem with great imagery. You have utilized the words well.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/14/2020 5:06:00 AM
Thank you for the many kind words you've bestowed on my lines.
Date: 11/13/2020 6:45:00 PM
Excellent piece dear Jenna.. Congratulations on your TOP WIN!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/14/2020 5:05:00 AM
Thanks so very much for your congrats, JCB.
Date: 11/13/2020 5:27:00 PM
So well done Jenna congrats on a top win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/14/2020 5:05:00 AM
Thank you for the honor of choosing my write, John. Your themes are always interesting, and it's fun to take part in your contests.
Date: 11/13/2020 1:36:00 PM
I knew this would do well Jenna, many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/14/2020 5:03:00 AM
Thanks for the congrats and the many supportive comments you leave for me, Jan.
Date: 11/13/2020 1:14:00 PM
Jenna, this is so dreamy and ethereal, a poetic tribute to our night sky and its inhabitants. You took the eight words and wove a delightfully positive dreamscape. My hearty congratulations for your worthy first place win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/14/2020 5:03:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats and kind comments, John. You know I enjoy the value of your comments.
Date: 10/24/2020 7:10:00 AM
Wow! That was an absolute treat to read. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2020 11:31:00 AM
Your comment delivered a smile. Thank you so much, Mark.
Date: 10/24/2020 5:29:00 AM
SO beautiful. A true inspiration and caress from the muse. I love it. God bless you with many more
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2020 11:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Regina.
Date: 10/23/2020 5:30:00 PM
You wove the words into an exceptional poem Jenna, i think this will appeal to the sponsor, well done young lady:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2020 11:30:00 AM
I hope it does well, Jan. Thanks for your support and encouragement.
Date: 10/23/2020 9:07:00 AM
WoW! Jena, You have used the chosen word well in this well written piece. I found it celestial and dreamy. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/23/2020 10:17:00 AM
I'm so pleased you enjoyed the journey, Alexis. Thanks so much.
Date: 10/23/2020 9:06:00 AM
Enjoyed your celestial journey to the stars, Jenna, hope it was a successful trip. Great use of the allocated words. Good luck and have a great weekend. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/23/2020 10:16:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. The moon was generous in granting permission for my adventure. Stardust gathered and safely stored away. ;)

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