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Gathering Dust

emerald still pond yellow musty pages hoarded cobwebs of the mind © Nadiya (03 Mar '15) *Placed 3rd in the contest 'Gathering Dust' by John Lawless on 25 March 2015. *Placed 3rd in the contest '10 or less lines' on 14 Oct 2015.

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Skat A

Date: 10/16/2015 9:33:00 PM

Poesy, Congratulations on your win. -SKAT-

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2015 7:55:00 PM

such interesting imagery. Congrats for your win!

James Inman

Date: 10/15/2015 9:08:00 AM

Enjoyed this very much.

Poesy Relish
Date: 10/15/2015 9:12:00 AM

Thank you very much James

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/15/2015 2:05:00 AM

Congrats on superb win poesy with this wonderful write!

Lin Lane

Date: 10/14/2015 11:19:00 PM

Well written, poesy. Congratulations. ~ Lin ~

Poesy Relish
Date: 10/15/2015 9:11:00 AM

Thank you Lin

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/14/2015 8:31:00 PM

CONGRATS ON THIS WINNING POEM!

Poesy Relish
Date: 10/15/2015 9:11:00 AM

Thank you Robert :)

Funom Makama

Date: 10/13/2015 8:18:00 AM

longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!

Poesy Relish
Date: 10/14/2015 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Funom.. this is exactly how I feel as well at the moment... Hope to read more of your writes..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/19/2015 4:00:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2015 11:25:00 AM

Poesy, Congratulations on your awesome gathering Dust win..... Luv ~LINDA~

Eve Roper

Date: 3/16/2015 11:46:00 AM

Nad, emerald words so well written. Congratulations on your win. Blessings Eve

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/16/2015 1:08:00 PM

Thank you Eve... nad

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/16/2015 8:26:00 AM

Much said in so few words, Nad. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/16/2015 1:08:00 PM

Thank you Sandra

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/15/2015 7:47:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 10:11:00 PM

Thank you very much Debbie..lov, nad

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 3:32:00 PM

Poesy, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 10:09:00 PM

Thank you skat

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/15/2015 2:07:00 PM

I love short forms the best, they say so much in a few words..You captured the idea in a few syllables. Congrats. BG

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 2:21:00 PM

Thank you very much Barbara... appreciate your visit and glad you liked it... nad

Paul Callus

Date: 3/15/2015 1:39:00 PM

I am pleased to be back with congratulations on a top win, Nadiya! This had winner written over right from the start! All the best. // paul

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 1:42:00 PM

Thank you very much Paul for the supportive comments throughout

John Lawless

Date: 3/15/2015 11:47:00 AM

This senryu lodged itself in my cobwebs and had me revisiting it's simplicity. Thank you for participating in the contest.

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 12:43:00 PM

Thank you John for this contest... it was nice writing on this topic... nad

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2015 11:27:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Nadiya:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 12:48:00 PM

Thank you very much Jan

Justin Bordner

Date: 3/12/2015 8:17:00 PM

Our Past should become apart of the youth of our Present Nadiya...thank you for stimulating my mind with the color and texture of your poetry...J.A.B.

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/15/2015 12:47:00 PM

Thank you Justin for the read... appreciate it

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/12/2015 11:18:00 AM

The ages and the pages cloud the purity of thought. As innocence gets left behind in clarity we sought. Love your senryu Nadiya. It may be time for us to get a recycle bin and a swiffer. :)

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/12/2015 12:24:00 PM

appreciate your visits Robert and thank you very much... glad that you liked my pens... nad

Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2015 12:16:00 PM

I love this Senryu, Nadiya! You paint lovely images that tickle our strings of thought. #7 gl in contest. // paul

Poesy Relish
Date: 3/11/2015 3:02:00 PM

Thank you very much dear Paul... pleased that you liked my pen.. nad