Gathering Dust

It gathered them, 
the dust in the wind,
to a one-room building
filled with laughter and friends.

A time for Johnny
to pull Sally's pig tails.
Boys hiding frogs
in girl's lunch pails.

Inkwells for writing,
catalogs for reading.
Not much else
farm kids needing.

It gathered the children
of Sally and Johnny,
and before them,
their Daddy and Mommy.

In a dark store room,
no longer a must,
the old school bell
gathers a different dust.



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Contest: Gathering Dust
Sponsor: John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Horsman Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 8:24 AM
another gem from you Arlene,,just love this...
Kamoonpuri Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 2:53 PM
An engaging poem and i like how u captured the scenes in rhyming meter freeverse. And a new idea take on dust and where it gathers. Thumbs up. Nice to read another frm u.
Sergi Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 8:12 AM
Great Write, Arlene: Your poem reminds of a book I read by David Baldacci, "Wish you were here."
Trichet Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 6:21 PM
You have created something very special here Arlene. Superb write, I loved it from the moment I stepped into that room...GL
Relish Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 3:23 PM
Loved your take on the topic Arlene... the topic had reminded me of Grape of Wrath by Steinbeck which portrays how the Okies and others are united in their migration to california....
Johnson Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 1:10 PM
You've rung the bell of simpler times. With sentiment and wonderful rhymes.
Sirak Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:22 AM
Very creative and unique. I think you have a winner.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 4:15 AM
a good theme for the contest!! uniquer one!
Gorelick Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 10:15 PM
What a clever take on the contest. I love it. BG
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 6:14 PM
wow, I think you did a really great job with the theme. Thinking outside the box. I LIKE that.
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