Gasping Stars Look Down Upon My Tired Soul

Gasping Stars Look Down Upon My Tired Soul


When I need to again find my own way
late midnight walks are my mainstay
There is this place I walk and roam
comfort away from worries of my home

The sidewalk ends and fields begin
I imagine they stretch and never end
Cool night air soothes my tired brain
far away, whistle of an old night train

My pace slows to soak so much more in
I am not alone, night is my friend
Gasping stars look down upon my soul
Seeking calm, I then reach my goal

Dog barks sadly as I slowly trod by
moans so blue, almost seems to cry
Past the farmhouse my favorite tree
massive black oak, does so comfort me

Gazing at its massive majestic form
I see damage from a terrible storm
Ahh yes, none are immune from harm
not even this great titan on the farm

Very slowly I turn to find my way back
retracing this walk along this track
A calm has now found my lonely spirit
happiness approaches I can even hear it

My pace increases as I seek to return
to the place where my love does burn
Family , the gift of my very long life
my children, my love , my sweet wife

When I need to again find my own way
late midnight walks are my mainstay

Robert Lindley, 1-11-2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/17/2015 1:03:00 PM
love taking walks along the shore at night to hear the sea whispering voices golden beautiful ink flowing excellent piece robert bless you
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:49:00 PM
Liam, no sea near me but if there was I walk in the sand and surf for sure! I have a sweet spot down by the river, the waves lapping ever so softly at dusk works wonders for me when I am a bit down..
Date: 1/13/2015 6:16:00 AM
A night walk that relaxes the mind...you manage to take me along with you, Robert. I have done that a few times; silence and the fresh night air can work wonders! // paul
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:47:00 PM
You are too kind my friend. Sometimes a man needs silence to hear the air talk. Just seems to be a greater gift when its at night. I hope you enjoyed the walk with me my friend..
Date: 1/11/2015 3:31:00 PM
Thank you Emile.. Pet's words from the heart always ring true to fellow poets. Poetry is nothing when no truth lies within it. I walk the path and God speaks by way of Nature, stillness of the night and heavenly stars so very bright! The moon his lantern beams on down. All is at peace in this ole town..
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Date: 1/11/2015 1:03:00 PM
Wonderful work with great thought given to the subject mater as it is gently unfolded for the readers delight.
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