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Garnets and Carnations

cut
right and
radiant
deep love and Warmth.
Garnets of red are January’s friend.
 The sweet smell of red carnations drift in the air 
Admiration
is what my 
flower 
Means.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/21/2012 9:23:00 PM congrats cory on a stupendous win for this creative entry my friend.. hope all is well..luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/19/2012 9:40:00 PM Glad to see this gem made the winners' list, Cory. Congratulations to you! Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 1/19/2012 8:32:00 AM Congratulations on your win Cory. Well done Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/19/2012 7:56:00 AM Congratulations on the win for your poem in Tracie's "~Flowers or Stones~" contest Cory. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Debra Squyres Date: 1/19/2012 6:48:00 AM A beautiful stone, a lovely flower and a really nice poem of the two. Congrats on your placement in the contest !! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/15/2012 5:47:00 PM HOw lovely the way you combined both flower and stone, Cory. I really like this, and you used a good form for it. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 1/15/2012 2:06:00 PM Great double take here, Cory...this was the perfect form for this contest. It showcased your month so nicely. January is where it's at..my husband's and father's bdays are here too...good luck, Cory...Gwendolen Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/15/2012 7:27:00 AM incredible, cory.. are you january-born like me, tracie, and david williams??... winner for me..:) huggs! Login to Reply Cory Long Date: 1/15/2012 5:18:00 PM yeah jan 21 :)

Robert Pettit Date: 1/14/2012 8:11:00 PM Great idea for a tectracys poem, Cory. In the sixth line, there are eleven syllables which is one too many. Just a suggestion: how about replacing "Surrounded by" with "We have those"? Everything else looks fine. Login to Reply Cory Long Date: 1/15/2012 6:56:00 AM thank you! cory