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Garnets and Carnations

cut right and radiant deep love and Warmth. Garnets of red are January’s friend. The sweet smell of red carnations drift in the air Admiration is what my flower Means.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/21/2012 9:23:00 PM

congrats cory on a stupendous win for this creative entry my friend.. hope all is well..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2012 9:40:00 PM

Glad to see this gem made the winners' list, Cory. Congratulations to you!

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/19/2012 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Cory. Well done

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2012 7:56:00 AM

Congratulations on the win for your poem in Tracie's "~Flowers or Stones~" contest Cory. Love, Carol

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/19/2012 6:48:00 AM

A beautiful stone, a lovely flower and a really nice poem of the two. Congrats on your placement in the contest !!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2012 5:47:00 PM

HOw lovely the way you combined both flower and stone, Cory. I really like this, and you used a good form for it.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/15/2012 2:06:00 PM

Great double take here, Cory...this was the perfect form for this contest. It showcased your month so nicely. January is where it's at..my husband's and father's bdays are here too...good luck, Cory...Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/15/2012 7:27:00 AM

incredible, cory.. are you january-born like me, tracie, and david williams??... winner for me..:) huggs!

Cory Long
Date: 1/15/2012 5:18:00 PM

yeah jan 21 :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/14/2012 8:11:00 PM

Great idea for a tectracys poem, Cory. In the sixth line, there are eleven syllables which is one too many. Just a suggestion: how about replacing "Surrounded by" with "We have those"? Everything else looks fine.

Cory Long
Date: 1/15/2012 6:56:00 AM

thank you! cory