Garnet

Glowing like a hot fire
Any shade of red just won't do;
Renegade shadows 
Nearly misread as blood; 
Energizing the cold 
The flame of January.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 30, 2014 at 2:05 AM
Melani, Awesome win ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 6:00 PM
wow, a short one but Really GOOD. Congrats on your garnet poem.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Melani
Gorelick Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 5:45 PM
You picked one of my favorite stones. Well done..and congrats. BG
Udaeta Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 7:33 PM
Mine too .. I'm a January Baby Thanks for the feedback :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 4:44 PM
Congrad's on Your Win! Light & LOVE
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 4:04 PM
I love this I'm a january birthday - i have a n unusual green garnet necklace - cost me an arm and a leg lol- congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Udaeta Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 7:34 PM
Raw Garnet is green.. (: I'm a January Baby too! Thanks for the feedback :)
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