Garnet

This garnet chain you gave me Is proof of your love And in this, your face I see Smiling from above I keep this chain near my heart Wear it every day Me and your love never part In my soul, you stay This garnet chain you gave me Shining in red hue A bond as strong as can be Joining me to you

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Constance La France

Date: 7/21/2023 2:22:00 PM

Jo, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge G Words !

Valsa George

Date: 7/1/2023 7:16:00 AM

Some mementos are so dear to heart especially when gifted by the one who once loved you dearly, but is no more there. Beautiful poem. Congratulations on your first place win.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/30/2023 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful Rhyme write. Have a blessed day/weekend....................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/30/2023 7:39:00 AM

Tremendous and beautiful writing on Garnet. Congratulations!

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/29/2023 6:25:00 PM

Poem written for someone mean the most. Good work.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/29/2023 2:34:00 PM

That’s so lovely Joanne, truly worthy of your win in Constance’s contest, well done… Belle

Vincent Flannery

Date: 6/27/2023 5:06:00 PM

Beautiful thoughts put in the perfect words in this wonderfully written poem. Your work is always beautiful and so often inspiring. Thank you for your thoughts and concern. All is well! I hope and pray that all is well with you also. Thank you again Joanna. God Bless You. P.S. Garnet and Gold were my high colors Cardinal Dougherty, the good ol days. Take care.